Re: Document progressed to Committee Draft / Public Review status

[Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>]

Hi Detlef,

   I'm checking the document; unfortunately it looks like an old  
template was used and there are a number of things that need to be  
changed before this can move forward.

   If you look at this document:
http://docs.oasis-open.org/dss-x/profiles/visualsig/v1.0/oasis-dssx-1.0-profiles-visualsig.html

   You'll see the proper format for the URIs, the TC name, declaring  
an authoritative version, status, and copyright notice.

   Also, please note the proper format for citations for other OASIS  
work:
OASIS
Stage (Committee Draft 01, Committee Draft 02, Committee Specifcation  
01, etc. or Standard)
Title (italicized or in quotation marks)
Approval Date (Month YYYY)
URI of the actual Authoritative Specification (namespace is not  
acceptable as the content changes over time)

For example:

[EDXL-HAVE]

OASIS Standard, "Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Hospital  
AVailability Exchange (HAVE) Version 1.0", November 2008.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/edxl-have/os/emergency_edxl_have-1.0-spec-os.doc


Lastly, the spec must also have a conformance section.

Regards,

Mary


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On Jun 24, 2009, at 5:25 AM, Huehnlein, Detlef wrote:

> Dear Mary,
>
> attached you will find a .zip file, which contains the Committee  
> Draft 01 version of the
> "Profile for comprehensive multi-signature verification
> reports for OASIS Digital Signature Services Version 1.0"  
> in .doc, .pdf and .htm.
>
> This document should appear in the public drafts section of the DSS-X
> website. I doubt, that the specification URIs on the first page are  
> already in line with
> the official OASIS guidelines, but I assume that you will take care  
> about
> such formal issues.
>
> Please don't hesitate to contact me, if there is anything else I  
> could / need do to
> initiate the public review process for this document. Thank you in  
> advance for your
> efforts!
>
> Best regards,
>   Detlef
>
>
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