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Subject: Comments: Async, Code-Signing, XAdES, ESeal
'nother round of profile comments: (comments in change-tracking): http://trevp.net/dss/oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-asynchronous-processing-spec-wd-04.doc http://trevp.net/dss/oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-eseal-spec-wd-04.doc http://trevp.net/dss/oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-XAdES-spec-wd-05.doc Code-Signing ------------------------------ Section 1, the more recent profile template drops the terms "protocol profiles", "signature profiles", "processing profiles", since it was confusing to label the parts of a profile as profiles. Instead it says "This document profiles the protocols, processing rules, etc.." Section 2.1, the 2 paragraphs should be more clearly linked, eg: "If it does so, " Section 3.1.1: this says async support is MUST, but Section 2.1 said it was MAY. Sections 4 and 5 could be removed, and the Introduction revised in light. Section 6: what is a "ReferenceID"? Also, the last bullet is truncated. Section 7, second bullet: s/transport or security/security/ Trevor
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