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Subject: Comments: Async, Code-Signing, XAdES, ESeal



'nother round of profile comments:

(comments in change-tracking):
http://trevp.net/dss/oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-asynchronous-processing-spec-wd-04.doc
http://trevp.net/dss/oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-eseal-spec-wd-04.doc
http://trevp.net/dss/oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-XAdES-spec-wd-05.doc


Code-Signing
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Section 1, the more recent profile template drops the terms "protocol 
profiles", "signature profiles", "processing profiles", since it was 
confusing to label the parts of a profile as profiles.  Instead it says 
"This document profiles the protocols, processing rules, etc.."

Section 2.1, the 2 paragraphs should be more clearly linked, eg: "If it 
does so, "

Section 3.1.1: this says async support is MUST, but Section 2.1 said it was 
MAY.

Sections 4 and 5 could be removed, and the Introduction revised in light.

Section 6: what is a "ReferenceID"?  Also, the last bullet is truncated.

Section 7, second bullet: s/transport or security/security/


Trevor



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