[ebxml-cppa-negot] Draft Spec Comments

[Monica Martin <mmartin@certivo.net>]

Marty,
On the futures document:
1. Suggest we combine the different nuances associated with
renegotiation of agreed upon items.  I believe there are a few
complementary references in the document (1.8, 1.3 Reopening, for
example).  This could also affect 1.6 (ordering could be affected by
many of these things.  Suggest this section be last and address any
relationship to previous sections.
2. Section 1.12, may need to understand if this affects the ebMS
specification - my concern is that we understand the retry, retry
intervals, etc. that are associated with a conversation (and to properly
handle errors such as timeouts vs. suspension).  Brings into question
the idea of state or transaction management that occurs at different
levels.
3. On Section 2.5, need to discuss this carefully, because the process
level may be dictated by terms and conditions.  I do not believe
currently it is desired that the CPPA-Negotiation scope include that.
Combine 2.6 as a possible constraint to 2.5.

On Negotiation specification:
1. Provide clear distinction in process flow in Figure 2 and line 404,
where a CPP is mentioned, and what is out of scope and a part of the
futures document (Section 1.1).
2. Section 13.13: Support Kartha's request to clarify this section about
the transitions to different business states.

Note: Only briefly reviewed the changed items, excluding Jean's work as
I have gone through that thoroughly before.

Monica




-----Original Message-----
From: Martin W Sachs [mailto:mwsachs@us.ibm.com]
Sent: Monday, January 27, 2003 11:49 AM
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Subject: [ebxml-cppa-negot] new draft specification






This time, with the attachments.

Regards,
Marty

(See attached file: negotiation.spec.futures.24Jan03.pdf)(See attached
file: negotiation.spec.futures.24Jan03.doc)

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I have just posted the latest draft specification to our web page.  The
zip
file contains the draft in both DOC and PDF form as well as all the XSD
and
XML files (in text form) that are part of the specification. Change
tracking shows what has changed in the draft since the last version that
was posted to the web site.

Included in the draft specification are notes (bold-ital-caps) on all
loose
ends that I know about.

Comments on this draft MUST reference the line numbers in the PDF.

I have attached below, the latest futures document as DOC and PDF files.
As above, please reference the line numbers in the PDF with any
comments.

Regards,
Marty

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Martin W. Sachs
IBM T. J. Watson Research Center
P. O. B. 704
Yorktown Hts, NY 10598
914-784-7287;  IBM tie line 863-7287
Notes address:  Martin W Sachs/Watson/IBM
Internet address:  mwsachs @ us.ibm.com
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