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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (EMIX-402) Improve Clarity inexample illustration (cloned)
Improve Clarity in example illustration (cloned) ------------------------------------------------ Key: EMIX-402 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-402 Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC Issue Type: Improvement Environment: Paul Knight Reporter: Toby Considine Assignee: William Cox Line Type Comment 9 Editorial (ed) Reference should be [NIST Roadmap] 20 ed Remove extra words "listed in" and "sections" 35 ed Reference should be [IEC TC57] 54.5 ed Need reference for [RDDL 2.0] (cited at 55 ed Use proper OASIS citation format 62 ed Use proper OASIS citation format 74.5 ed Add reference to ISO20022, cited at 78 ed No such OASIS designation as "an approved White Paper of the EMIX TC" 113 ed Remove ":" 155 ed Brackets, not parens, around "TeMIX" 157 consistency TeMIX is defined differently from two lines above. There are several other instances of this. Is it transactive or transactional? If it is both, explain better. 255 terms Need to define ISO and RTO (and differentiate ISO from the ISO on line 37) 287 ed its → is 313 ed repeating you → repeating as you 315 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) 322 ed and → an 330 ed application the → application of the 355 ed for a one → for one 386 ed in figure 4-2, should probably be EMIX rather than Emix Product 400 ed Table 4-2 - Exercise Lead time - remove extra "to" 400 ed Table 4-2 - Strike Price - add "for" before "delivery" 406 ed Table 4-3 heading - TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) 422 ed Table 4-5 - Exercise - step to that → step that 450 ed remove "to" 454 ed Table 5-1 - Minimum Duration Between Invocations - capitalize second "resource"; remove "has" 454 ed Table 5-1 - Response Time - from here to end of table, capitalize "resource" (8 times) (and lower-case Requests) 459 ed Table 5-2 - first line - capitalize "resource" 467 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) 479 ed n → on 480 ed is → are 481 ed remove final half-sentence ( or complete it) 485 ed Si → SI 489 ed precise → price 510 ed space before "describe" 513 ed Table 7-1 - Product Description - last sentence is unintelligible; capitalize Gluons and Interval 513 ed Sequence - Capitalize Sequence, Intervals 515 ed is → as ; capitalize Interval 524 clarity In interval B, meaning of "50 / MWh" is not clear. Are there units to "50"? Is it $50 / MWh? or 50 MWh? In interval C, what is 1.5 / MWh? Why is this representation different from Interval A? 535 ed lower case Provides 551 ed with in → within 561 ed first "load" → loads 563 ed period at end 569 ed delete last "Descriptions" and italicize the first one 584 ed while → whole 600 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) 603 ed Nightmare paragraph - TEMIX, capitalize Product, remove extra period, remove spaces inside parens, TEMIX. TEMIX 625 ed Table 9-6 - Measurement Interval - of → if 697 ed matters → matter 743 ed Is it transactive or transactional? 744 ed It → TeMIX 759 ed When → When a 765 ed 2-hours → two hours 766 ed 2-MWh → 2 MWh 772 ed 2- hours → two hours 773 ed 2-hours → two hours 787 ed missing reference 790 ed Table 11-1 - Transactive State - "conformed to" → restricted to (??) 792 ed Table 11-2 - Granularity - space after "at" 820 ed Table 13-1 - Power Frequency - Powr → Power 857 ed Table 15-1 - Product quality - and be → can be 887 ed Capitalize gluon 899 ed remove ";" 900 ed capitalize lineage 902 ed Sentence beginning "In general, if ..." has no "then" clause. Probably - delete "if" 904 ed delete "an" ; argument → model (?) 905 ed discussed → discussed as a 908 ed roots the → roots for the (?) 911 ed capitalize artifact 918 ed capitalize artifact 922 ed delete "are" 928-932 ed mind your P's and Q's - capitalize Price and Quantity 1015 ed change "X-" to "x-" (lower case) (or if upper case is allowed, be explicit) 1018 ed defined → defined in 1042 ed Sentence doesn't parse. Maybe: adding → that (?) 1102 ed Gluon - though → through (feed this one back into WS-Calendar) 1102 ed Table label should be C-1 1108 ed Table label should be C-2 1114 ed Table label should be C-3 -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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