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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (EMIX-401) Ominibus Issue for PaulKnight
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-401?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=25739#action_25739 ] Toby Considine commented on EMIX-401: ------------------------------------- 535 ed lower case Provides done tc 551 ed with in → within done in wd24 561 ed first "load" → loads done tc 563 ed period at end done tc 569 ed delete last "Descriptions" and italicize the first one done tc 584 ed while → whole done - tc 600 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) done tc 603 ed Nightmare paragraph - TEMIX, capitalize Product, remove extra period, remove spaces inside parens, TEMIX. TEMIX done tc 625 ed Table 9-6 - Measurement Interval - of → if ??? Think this was gotten in wd24 697 ed matters → matter done tc 743 ed Is it transactive or transactional? transactive - tc 744 ed It → TeMIX fixed -tc 759 ed When → When a done tc 765 ed 2-hours → two hours done tc 766 ed 2-MWh → 2 MWh done tc 772 ed 2- hours → two hours done tc 773 ed 2-hours → two hours done tc 787 ed missing reference fixed in WD24 790 ed Table 11-1 - Transactive State - "conformed to" → restricted to (??) changed in WD24 792 ed Table 11-2 - Granularity - space after "at" Fixed in WD24 820 ed Table 13-1 - Power Frequency - Powr → Power done in WD24 857 ed Table 15-1 - Product quality - and be → can be done tc 887 ed Capitalize gluon done tc 899 ed remove ";" done tc 900 ed capitalize lineage done tc 902 ed Sentence beginning "In general, if ..." has no "then" clause. Probably - delete "if" done tc 904 ed delete "an" ; argument → model (?) done "model" tc 905 ed discussed → discussed as a done tc 908 ed roots the → roots for the (?) done tc 911 ed capitalize artifact done tc 918 ed capitalize artifact done tc > Ominibus Issue for Paul Knight > ------------------------------ > > Key: EMIX-401 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-401 > Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC > Issue Type: Improvement > Environment: Paul Knight > Reporter: Toby Considine > Assignee: William Cox > > Line Type Comment > 9 Editorial (ed) Reference should be [NIST Roadmap] > 20 ed Remove extra words "listed in" and "sections" > 35 ed Reference should be [IEC TC57] > 54.5 ed Need reference for [RDDL 2.0] (cited at > 55 ed Use proper OASIS citation format > 62 ed Use proper OASIS citation format > 74.5 ed Add reference to ISO20022, cited at > 78 ed No such OASIS designation as "an approved White Paper of the EMIX TC" > 113 ed Remove ":" > 155 ed Brackets, not parens, around "TeMIX" > 157 consistency TeMIX is defined differently from two lines above. There are several other instances of this. Is it transactive or transactional? If it is both, explain better. > 255 terms Need to define ISO and RTO (and differentiate ISO from the ISO on line 37) > 287 ed its → is > 313 ed repeating you → repeating as you > 315 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) > 322 ed and → an > 330 ed application the → application of the > 355 ed for a one → for one > 386 ed in figure 4-2, should probably be EMIX rather than Emix Product > 400 ed Table 4-2 - Exercise Lead time - remove extra "to" > 400 ed Table 4-2 - Strike Price - add "for" before "delivery" > 406 ed Table 4-3 heading - TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) > 422 ed Table 4-5 - Exercise - step to that → step that > 450 ed remove "to" > 454 ed Table 5-1 - Minimum Duration Between Invocations - capitalize second "resource"; remove "has" > 454 ed Table 5-1 - Response Time - from here to end of table, capitalize "resource" (8 times) (and lower-case Requests) > 459 ed Table 5-2 - first line - capitalize "resource" > 467 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) > 479 ed n → on > 480 ed is → are > 481 ed remove final half-sentence ( or complete it) > 485 ed Si → SI > 489 ed precise → price > 510 ed space before "describe" > 513 ed Table 7-1 - Product Description - last sentence is unintelligible; capitalize Gluons and Interval > 513 ed Sequence - Capitalize Sequence, Intervals > 515 ed is → as ; capitalize Interval > 524 clarity In interval B, meaning of "50 / MWh" is not clear. Are there units to "50"? Is it $50 / MWh? or 50 MWh? In interval C, what is 1.5 / MWh? Why is this representation different from Interval A? > 535 ed lower case Provides > 551 ed with in → within > 561 ed first "load" → loads > 563 ed period at end > 569 ed delete last "Descriptions" and italicize the first one > 584 ed while → whole > 600 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document) > 603 ed Nightmare paragraph - TEMIX, capitalize Product, remove extra period, remove spaces inside parens, TEMIX. TEMIX > 625 ed Table 9-6 - Measurement Interval - of → if > 697 ed matters → matter > 743 ed Is it transactive or transactional? > 744 ed It → TeMIX > 759 ed When → When a > 765 ed 2-hours → two hours > 766 ed 2-MWh → 2 MWh > 772 ed 2- hours → two hours > 773 ed 2-hours → two hours > 787 ed missing reference > 790 ed Table 11-1 - Transactive State - "conformed to" → restricted to (??) > 792 ed Table 11-2 - Granularity - space after "at" > 820 ed Table 13-1 - Power Frequency - Powr → Power > 857 ed Table 15-1 - Product quality - and be → can be > 887 ed Capitalize gluon > 899 ed remove ";" > 900 ed capitalize lineage > 902 ed Sentence beginning "In general, if ..." has no "then" clause. Probably - delete "if" > 904 ed delete "an" ; argument → model (?) > 905 ed discussed → discussed as a > 908 ed roots the → roots for the (?) > 911 ed capitalize artifact > 918 ed capitalize artifact > 922 ed delete "are" > 928-932 ed mind your P's and Q's - capitalize Price and Quantity > 1015 ed change "X-" to "x-" (lower case) (or if upper case is allowed, be explicit) > 1018 ed defined → defined in > 1042 ed Sentence doesn't parse. Maybe: adding → that (?) > 1102 ed Gluon - though → through (feed this one back into WS-Calendar) > 1102 ed Table label should be C-1 > 1108 ed Table label should be C-2 > 1114 ed Table label should be C-3 -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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