Re: [huml] Groups - HumanMarkupTC-CharterRev-01.rtf uploaded

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

I have amended the draft and uploaded it. I meant the statement that 
we were planning to incorporate previously established standards to 
indicate that writing new standards for those older ones was out of 
scope, but I made it explicit. The Applications, likkewise, was meant 
to indicate areas where developers should find our work useful if not 
essential, so I made that explicit too. I hope its getting closer.

Ciao,
Rex

At 9:39 AM -0400 9/27/04, Karl F. Best wrote:
>Rex:
>
>* "Scope" should also include a statement about what is out of scope.
>
>* "Applications" is not a valid section head in a charter, though 
>the paragraph under that heading may be useful perhaps under 
>Statement of Purpose(?).
>
>* You should also delete the line "The archive for previous discussion..."
>
>* Under "List of Deliverables" you should delete any deliverables 
>that have already been completed, and change any dates before the 
>present. Does the TC intend to progress any of these to OASIS 
>Standard approval? You may want to state that.
>
>* You also need to add sections for "Audience" and for "Language" 
>(see the required items for charters at 
>http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/process.php#formation)
>
>-Karl
>
>
>
>
>rexb@starbourne.com wrote:
>>The document HumanMarkupTC-CharterRev-01.rtf has been submitted by 
>>Rex Brooks (rexb@starbourne.com) to the OASIS HumanMarkup TC 
>>document repository.
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>>Document Description:
>>This a first draft of the Revised Charter.
>>
>>Download Document: 
>>http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/humanmarkup/download.php/9425/HumanMarkupTC-CharterRev-01.rtf
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