RE: [imi] Editor's drafts of SAML 1.1 and SAML 2.0 profiles uploaded

[Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>]

Thanks, Scott.  The new drafts address these issues, other than the cross-references, which I kept.

I'd rather that we kept the cross-references and update them in parallel.  They seem to me to be important contextual information that we should try to retain, if possible.

				-- Mike

-----Original Message-----
From: Scott Cantor [mailto:cantor.2@osu.edu] 
Sent: Tuesday, February 02, 2010 12:57 PM
To: Mike Jones; imi@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [imi] Editor's drafts of SAML 1.1 and SAML 2.0 profiles uploaded

Some minor formatting/editorial nits in the SAML 2.0 profile, ed-05, PDF
version:

Line 4, if you capitalize Relying, I think you probably want to capitalize
issuing.

Line 6-7, the font is smaller after the SAML2Core reference.

Line 81-82, I advise against the cross-reference because it's an extra
hassle to get it handled as a Designated Cross Reference as the documents
move forward in tandem. Or if we keep it, just note that we need to do that
as we move them forward.

-- Scott