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Subject: RE: [legalxml-courtfiling] Re-revised proposed TC charter
John, The revisions all look fine to me, both
as a member of the TC and as Editor. One question I have relates to a line that
was already in the draft:
The way this is written, I am led to wonder
whether the word “filings” should be rendered as “filing”
here. That would be correct if it refers to the activity of “filing
electronically.” However, if the word “filings”
relates to the payments, as in “payments associated with filings,”
then the word “electronically” needs to be at the beginning of this
item. The result would be: 5.
electronically sending and receiving payments associated with filings, If the latter is the intended sense for
this item, I hope you can shift the position of this word in the draft as a
simple editorial correction, placing the adverb “electronically” in
a different place for clarity’s sake. Regards, Roger Roger Winters Program and Project Manager King County Department of Judicial
Administration KCC-JA-0609 516 (206) 296-7838 From: John Greacen
[mailto:greacenjmg@earthlink.net] In I
attach our most recent effort. You can identify the modifications made in
Please
submit any objections or additions you want the TC to consider by the close of
business on December 17th. If
there are no further changes, I will submit the proposed document to OASIS
staff, who in turn will post it for a formal vote by TC members. |
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