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Subject: Review comments of sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc
In my last set of comments, I have included some general comments on the usage of @ when referring to attributes, usage of "e.g." and "i.e.". I did not point to specific line numbers that need attention. Here are some review comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc to take care of these: Missing @ when referring to attributes: Line 361: Two occurrences of "target attribute" to be replaced with "@target attribute" Line 726: @requires attribute Line 798: @requires attribute Line 955: @value attribute Line 1014: @source attribute Line 1016: @source attribute Line 1024: @file attribute Line 1027: @source attribute Line 1028: @file attribute Line 1036: @type attribute Line 1037: @element attribute Line 1217: @targetNamespace attribute Line 1300: @promote attribute Line 1439: @multiplicity attribute Line 1458: @wiredByImpl attribute Line 1461-62: @wiredByImpl attribute Line 1509: @uri attribute Line 1587: @mustSupply attribute Line 1661: @source attribute Line 1663: @source attribute Line 1698: @source attribute Line 1727-28: @target attribute Line 1884-85: Three occurrences of @autowire attribute Line 1890: @autowire attribute Line 2121: @targetNamespace, @name, @constrainingType, and @local Line 2126: @autowire Line 2128: @requires and @policySet Line 2318: @constrainingType attribute Line 2356: @targetNamespace attribute Line 2370: "@constrainingType" attribute -- remove quotes(??) Line 2379: @constrainingType attribute Line 2501: @callbackInterface attribute Line 2627: @callback attribute Line 2725: @uri attribute Line 2726: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute" Line 2731: @uri attribute Line 2733: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute" Line 2735: @name attribute Line 2834: "@uri" attribute -- remove quotes(??) Line 3448: @wsdlLocation and @schemaLocation attributes Line 3618: @location attribute Line 3676: @location attribute Appendix C: [ASM60004] - @promote attribute [ASM60011] - @multiplicity attribute [ASM60036] - @wiredByImpl attribute - two occurrences [ASM90001] - @uri attribute - lower case ################## Occurrences of "eg ": 83, 342, 822, 1599, 3459, 3722, 3769, 4705, [ASM12011], Occurrences of "eg.": 86, 1803, 2145, 2147, 3472, 3751 Occurrences of "e.g.": 1808, 2559, 2721, 2968, 3571, 3588, 3653, 3701 Occurrences of "i.e.": 850, 1080, 1314, 1441, 1471, 2838, 2846, 2847, 3395, 3496, 3686, 3780, [ASM50011], [ASM60005], [ASM60011], [ASM60012], [ASM12023], ################## Line 409: "a @type" instead of "an @type" Line 606: "a file" instead of "an file" Line 1027: Remove comma after "precedence". replace "then" with "than" Line 2763: @URI or @uri ? Line 2823: @URI or @uri ? [ASM40010] - "a @type" instead of "an @type" [ASM90003] - @URI or @uri ? ++Vamsi Apache Tuscany Committer http://tuscany.apache.org Apache Geronimo Committer and Member of PMC http://geronimo.apache.org
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