Re: [sca-policy] Issue 26 - security policy schema change - updatedproposal

["Rich.Levinson" <rich.levinson@oracle.com>]

Based on action from 6/23 conf call I am providing
feedback on this proposal.

Just a couple of minor comments:

  line 46: needs trailing "/" in: " <allow roles="listOfNCNames"/> "

  line 93: same as line 46, needs trailing "/"

  lines 101-102 says "... MUST satisfy the following security management
    requirements."  and then the section ends. This is confusing. It appeared
    to me that the reqts were left out, but see next comments:

  line 102: I suggest it should be terminated with a ":" and then apply the next
    suggestion for lines 104-127.

  lines 104-127: I suggest making this a list of 4 bullets rather than
    4 section numbers.

Additional comment I noticed in the main FW document, wd5,
  line 391:
    provides="authentication.message exactlyOne"
  should probably read:
    provides="authentication.message exactlyOnce"
 
  Also, question on the above: wouldn't it make sense to have
  "exactlyOnce" and the other reliability intents be qualifiers to
  to a parent "reliability" intent? (If so, I could submit new issue,
  if not, then this is just a typo fix)

    Thanks,
    Rich


 

Mike Edwards wrote:

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Dave,

Yes, cranky and foaming at the mouth......

...but I can't resist easy targets:

Line 56 has "</denyAll> ", which I believe should read "<denyAll/>"


Much more wickedly, I suspect that the maxOccurs attributes added in the schema between 202 and 235
may need revisiting, but here I defer to the XSD geniuses.


Yours,  Mike.

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David Booz <booz@us.ibm.com>

19/06/2008 21:24

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Subject	[sca-policy] Issue 26 - security policy schema change - updated proposal

This closes another of my AIs from the F2F, and creates more fodder for
Mike E :-)  He's so cranky these days.

(See attached file: Issue26_proposal_v2.doc)


Dave Booz
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