Re: [sca-policy] Proposed updates to the TA document - another pass....

[David Booz <booz@us.ibm.com>]

Hi Mike,

1) POL-TA-30007: POL30007 mentions intents satisfied by policySets and bindingTypes which is why I added words to that effect. Can you help me understand why you removed my changes?

2) POL-TA-40025: you made a comment but I didn't understand the question. POL40016 is talking about how policySets and intents from interfaces and interface elements play into the rules of where they are applied. POL40016 is not talking about policySets and intents which are attached directly to the reference.

3) POL-TA-40024 and POL-TA-40025: I changed the target to composite or component service (and reference respectively), you removed the composite. Why? I don't see anything in POL40016 that restricts the statement to component services and references.

4) Thanks for adding the TAs for POL40019, but I'm finding the words to be hard to parse. Could we re-word the first pre-req: a) <component/> has an <implementation/> which exposes a <service/> that has an <interface/> attached to it. Same comment (with adjustments for reference) on the other TA for POL40019.

5) POL-TA-80001: you made a comment, are you referring to the whole (b) prereq or just the end of it?

General comment: much of what you've done seems stylistic/editorial in nature where there are a number of different ways to word these things. I don't feel strongly about any particular style of expressing these TAs, so I'm fine with your changes, with the exceptions noted above.


Dave Booz
STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
"Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093 or 8-295-6093
e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com

Mike Edwards ---07/13/2009 10:43:20 AM---Dave, You inspired me. Here is my pass over your version of the document, fully

From:	Mike Edwards <mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com>
To:	sca-policy@lists.oasis-open.org
Date:	07/13/2009 10:43 AM
Subject:	Re: [sca-policy] Proposed updates to the TA document - another pass....

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Dave, 

You inspired me.  Here is my pass over your version of the document, fully change marked... 




Yours,  Mike.

Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
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From:	David Booz <booz@us.ibm.com>
To:	sca-policy@lists.oasis-open.org
Date:	12/07/2009 02:31
Subject:	[sca-policy] Proposed updates to the TA document

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I spent a lot of time reviewing this document and have come up with the following proposed changes. Please review closely. I tried to bring some consistency to the approach for the TAs, but may have missed some places as I did this work in about 7 different sessions, so my continuity may not have been great.

thanks in advance for reviewing

(See attached file: SCA-Policy-1.1-Test-Assertions-WD-01_dab11July2009.doc)

Dave Booz
STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
"Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093 or 8-295-6093
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