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Subject: public review submission for SOA-EERP specifications
The following issues have been identified in the submitted work products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org and the public review announced: SOA-EERP Business Quality of Service Version 1.0 1. Stage: remove 'OASIS' from stage identifier 2. Approval Date: this is the date the TC approved the CD/public review (24 June 2009) Please make sure date is in proper format as stated above. 3. Specification URIs: a. This Version: i. replace space character with '/' between .org and soa-eerp (3 times) ii. identify one of the 3 formats as Authoritative iii. Create physical hypertext links for each of the 3 URLs b. Latest Version: i. replace space character with '/' between .org and soa-eerp (3 times) ii. Create physical hypertext links for each of the 3 URLs 4. Technical Committee: Create physical hypertext link to TC public home page 5. Chair(s): Remove company name for William Cox (associate member) 6. Related work: Fix physical hypertext link for second document (appears to be a relative path) 7. Declared Namespace: All namespaces must be of the format http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/soa-eerp/... or http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/ns/... 8. Running footer: document identifier must match file name as given in this version URLs date must correspond to date of approval and be properly formatted (DD Month YYYY) 9. Status: The first two (out of three) physical hypertext links do not match the text and must be changed. 10. Notices: Note first line of last paragraph - add any relevant names/abbreviations including SOA-EERP 11. Normative References: UBL-20 - please provide link to the version-specific document per citation format (rather than directory) 12. Move 1.2.1 prior to 1.2 (make it 1.1.1); first paragraph is repeated. 13. Section 1.2.2 appears to be a non-normative reference? Whether normative or non-normative, it must be placed in the appropriate location and include proper citation format. 14. Acknowledgements: William Cox and Carl Mattocks are both Associate Members. The company name should not be displayed. ------ SOA-EERP Business Rating of Service Version 1.0 1. Stage: remove 'OASIS' from stage identifier 2. Approval Date: this is the date the TC approved the CD/public review (24 June 2009) Please make sure date is in proper format as stated above. 3. Specification URIs: a. This Version: i. identify one of the 3 formats as Authoritative ii. Fix physical hypertext links for each of the 3 URLs 4. Technical Committee: Create physical hypertext link to TC public home page 5. Chair(s): Remove company name for William Cox (associate member) 6. Related work: a. Create physical hypertext links for both documents b. Fix text URL for second document (add '/' after .org and remove space) 7. Declared Namespace: All namespaces must be of the format http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/soa-eerp/... or http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/ns/... 8. Running footer: document identifier must match file name as given in this version URLs date must correspond to date of approval and be properly formatted (DD Month YYYY) 9. Status: The physical hypertext links do not match the text and must be changed. (3 times) 10. Notices: Note first line of last paragraph - add any relevant names/abbreviations including SOA-EERP 11. Move 1.2.1 prior to 1.2 (make it 1.1.1); first paragraph is repeated. 12. Section 1.2.2 appears to be a non-normative reference? Whether normative or non-normative, it must be placed in the appropriate location and include proper citation format. 13. Acknowledgements: William Cox and Carl Mattocks are both Associate Members. The company name should not be displayed. ------ SOA-EERP Business Service Level Agreement Version 1.0 1. Stage: remove 'OASIS' from stage identifier 2. Approval Date: this is the date the TC approved the CD/public review (24 June 2009) Please make sure date is in proper format as stated above. 3. Specification URIs: a. This Version: i. replace space character with '/' between .org and soa-eerp (3 times) ii. identify one of the 3 formats as Authoritative iii. Create physical hypertext links for each of the 3 URLs b. Latest Version: i. replace space character with '/' between .org and soa-eerp (3 times) ii. Fix physical hypertext links for each of the 3 URLs 4. Technical Committee: Create physical hypertext link to TC public home page 5. Chair(s): Remove company name for William Cox (associate member) 6. Related work: Create physical hypertext link for second document 7. Declared Namespace: All namespaces must be of the format http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/soa-eerp/... or http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/ns/... 8. Running footer: document identifier must match file name as given in this version URLs date must correspond to date of approval and be properly formatted (DD Month YYYY) 9. Status: The three physical hypertext links do not match the text and must be corrected. 10. Notices: Note first line of last paragraph - add any relevant names/abbreviations including SOA-EERP 11. Normative References: a. UBL-20 - please provide link to the version-specific document per citation format (rather than directory) b. EERP-BQoS - please properly identify the stage as OASIS Committee Draft 0# with the date of approval and a link to the version-specific document per citation format 12. Move 1.2.1 prior to 1.2 (make it 1.1.1); first paragraph is repeated. 13. Section 1.2.2 appears to be non-normative references? Whether normative or non-normative, they must be placed in the appropriate location and include proper citation format. 14. Acknowledgements: William Cox and Carl Mattocks are both Associate Members. The company name should not be displayed. ----- White Paper 1. Somehow the recto (odd) footer with page number was lost? 2. Last revision date should match date on cover of white paper (I think it's auto-set to today's [current] date?) 3. Namespaces need to match those for the specifications 4. References - please use proper OASIS citation format 5. Fonts appear to randomly change and not correspond to template style; setting the "Normal" style back to Arial 10 from Times Roman 12 will resolve the problem. Because of the changes required to the namespace and the references section, these documents will need to be corrected and then re-approved as a new Committee Draft (CD03) and agreed to be submitted for public review. Regards, Mary Mary P McRae Director, Standards Development Technical Committee Administrator OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society email: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org web: www.oasis-open.org twitter: @fiberartisan #oasisopen phone: 1.603.232.9090 Standards are like parachutes: they work best when they're open.
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