Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Quality ofSer

Subject: Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Quality ofService Version 1.0

Hi all,

My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions are just that, suggestions only.

Please make the following changes to this document:

1. In 'This Version', please update the underlying URIs to the current version. Change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/bqos/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-wd09.xxx to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/bqos/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd04.xxx. That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/.

2. In the footer, please correct the spelling of September.

3. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to regular weight.

4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.pdf to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf, removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'.

Note that this was correct in the previous version.

5. In 'Normative References', please activate the link for [UBL-20]. Note that this was correct in the previous version.

6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc]. The date is October 2006.

7. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005.

8. Also in 'Normative References', [CEFACT] contains an incomplete title and a broken link. This was also true in the last version. I suggest updating with correct information. According to wikipedia, the latest version is http://www.unece.org/cefact/ebxml/CCTS_V2-01_Final.pdf, dated November 2003.

9. Also in 'Normative References', for [SOA-RM], please activate the actual URI to the document rather than the document title.

10. Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf versions.

Please contact me with any questions or comments.

Best regards,
Kim

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Kim Goolsby
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