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Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -SOA-EERPBusiness ServiceLevel Agreement Version 1.0
Kim, It looks good for all links, except the namespace document is not updated. The previous submission package has some typo on the namespace document, and the new version can be found @ http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39844/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis sion-package.zip. Please use the namespace document from this zip file to update. Regards, Szu Chang 源郵件: ----------------- 發件人: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org 日期: Fri, 15 Oct 2010 14:43:53 -0400 收件者: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn 主題: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -SOA-EERPBusiness ServiceLevel Agreement Version 1.0 Your attached file is problem-free. I've already uploaded the specs. I will upload this one & send out a general announcement. ~Kim 2010/10/15 eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn <eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn> > Kim, > > I don't know why the problem is still there, and unable to find the > attachment from you. > > Can you try the attached zip file? It has only the html file for bQoS, and > I have tested it under both Firefox and Explorer browsers. > > Regards, > > > Szu Chang > > > 源郵件: > ----------------- > 發件人: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > 日期: Fri, 15 Oct 2010 11:24:51 -0400 > 收件者: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn > 主題: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - > SOA-EERPBusiness ServiceLevel Agreement Version 1.0 > > > On Fri, Oct 15, 2010 at 11:23 AM, Kim Goolsby > <kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org>wrote: > > > Hi Szu, > > > > The problem with the bQoS html file is still there. I'm attaching a > picture > > of it. Please let me know of any questions. > > > > Thanks, > > Kim > > > > > > On Thu, Oct 14, 2010 at 2:04 PM, eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn < > > eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn> wrote: > > > >> Kim, > >> > >> All required changes are fixed, and new version of specs are uploaded > onto > >> TC repository @ > >> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/documents.php . > The > >> whole submission package is uploaded onto > >> > >> > > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis > >> > sion-package.zip< > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA > -EERP-PR02-submission-package.zip> > >> . > >> > >> Please let me know if there are any problems on this new submission > >> package. > >> > >> Regards, > >> > >> > >> > >> Szu Chang > >> > >> > >> Original Message: > >> ----------------- > >> From: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > >> Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2010 12:51:41 -0400 > >> To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org, mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org > >> Subject: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP > >> Business ServiceLevel Agreement Version 1.0 > >> > >> > >> *TCADMIN-253 <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>* > >> * > >> * > >> * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**Hi all, > >> > >> My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The > >> suggestions > >> are just that, suggestions only. > >> > >> Please make the following changes to this document: > >> * > >> * > >> * > >> * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>** > >> 1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs for the doc & pdf files are > >> incorrect. Please change from > >> > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxxto > >> > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx. > >> That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/. > >> > >> 2. In 'Previous Version', the document links are broken because the > >> spelling > >> of the filenames differ from those of the actual documents. Change from > >> > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-BSLA-Spec-cd03.xxxto > >> > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.html > >> . > >> That is, change 'Spec' to 'spec'. Please remember to correct the > >> underlying > >> URIs as well. > >> > >> 3. Also in 'Previous Version', the underlying URI for the html file > >> contains > >> extra spaces at the end (%0D), which results in a broken link. Please > >> remove. > >> > >> 4. In 'Latest Version', please change the text URIs from > >> > >> > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xxx > >> to > >> > >> > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-BSLA-Specification.xxx > >> < > >> > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx > >> x> > >> . That is, change 'bSLA' to 'BSLA'. The filenames in the underlying URIs > >> are > >> correct although two are broken links (see #5 below). > >> > >> 5. Also in 'Latest Version', the underlying URIs for the html & doc > files > >> contain extra spaces at the end (%0D), which results in broken links. > >> Please > >> remove. > >> > >> 6. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold > to > >> regular weight. > >> > >> 7. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please > >> change > >> from > >> > >> > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.p > >> dfto > >> > >> > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pd > >> > f< > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification. > pdf> > >> , > >> removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in > the > >> previous version. > >> > >> 8. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc]. > >> The > >> date is October 2006. > >> > >> 9. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to > >> [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005. > >> > >> 10. Also, in 'Normative References', for [ISO8601], I suggest changing > >> this > >> to a publicly-accessible URI. This link requires authenticated sign-in. > >> > >> 11. > >> Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & > pdf > >> versions. > >> > >> Please contact me with any questions or comments. > >> > >> Best regards, > >> Kim > >> * > >> -- > >> Kim Goolsby > >> Publications Specialist > >> OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society > >> email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > >> web: www.oasis-open.org > >> phone: 1.734.223.6890 > >> > >> > >> -------------------------------------------------------------------- > >> mail2web.com ?What can On Demand Business Solutions do for you? > >> http://link.mail2web.com/Business/SharePoint > >> > >> > >> > > > > > > -- > > Kim Goolsby > > Publications Specialist > > OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society > > email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > > web: www.oasis-open.org > > phone: 1.734.223.6890 > > > > > > -- > Kim Goolsby > Publications Specialist > OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society > email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > web: www.oasis-open.org > phone: 1.734.223.6890 > > > -------------------------------------------------------------------- > mail2web – 從 web 檢查您的電子郵件，網址 > http://mail2web.com/ . > > -- Kim Goolsby Publications Specialist OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org web: www.oasis-open.org phone: 1.734.223.6890 -------------------------------------------------------------------- mail2web – 從 web 檢查您的電子郵件，網址 http://mail2web.com/ .
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