Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0

["eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn" <eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn>]

Kim, 


It looks good for all links, except the namespace document is not updated.
The previous submission package has some typo on the namespace document,
and the new version can be found @ 
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39844/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis
sion-package.zip. 

Please use the namespace document from this zip file. 

Regards, 


Szu Chang  


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發件人: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
日期: Fri, 15 Oct 2010 14:57:11 -0400
收件者: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org,
mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org
主題: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -
SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0


Hi all,

All specs are uploaded. Please take a look & let me know of any comments.

Thanks,
Kim



On Thu, Oct 14, 2010 at 2:08 PM, eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn <
eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn> wrote:

> Kim,
>
> All required changes for SOA-EERP bRating spec are fixed, and new version
> of specs are uploaded onto TC repository @
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/documents.php . The
> whole submission package is uploaded onto
>
>
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis
>
sion-package.zip<http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA
-EERP-PR02-submission-package.zip>
> .
>
> Please let me know if there are any problems on this new submission
> package.
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> Szu Chang
>
>
> Original Message:
> -----------------
> From: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
> Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2010 12:49:30 -0400
> To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org, mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org
> Subject: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP
> Business Rating ofService Version 1.0
>
>
> *TCADMIN-254 <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>*
> *
> *
> * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**Hi all,
>
> My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The
> suggestions
> are just that, suggestions only.
>
> Please make the following changes to this document:
> *
> *
> *
> * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**
> 1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs are incorrect. Please change
from
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxxto
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx.
> That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/.
>
> 2.
> In 'Latest Version', please change the text & underlying URIs from
>
> <
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx
> x>
>
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification
> .<
>
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.h
>
tml%0D<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specific
ation.html%0D>
> >
>  xxx<
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specificatio
> n.xxx>
>
>  to
>
> <
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx
> x>
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification
> .<h
> ttp://
> docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.htm
> l>
> xxx.
>
> 3.  In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to
> regular weight.
>
> 4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please
> change
> from
>
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.p
>
df<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specificatio
n.pdf>
>  to
>
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pd
>
f<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.
pdf>
> ,
> removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in the
> previous version.
>
> 5. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc].
> The
> date is October 2006.
>
> 6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to
> [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005.
>
> 7.
> Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf
> versions.
>
> Please contact me with any questions or comments.
>
> Best regards,
> Kim
> *
> --
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> Publications Specialist
> OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society
> email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
> web: www.oasis-open.org
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