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Subject: Re: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3.1 Rewrite
Yes Michael, I believe it should be read as "manifested." Cheers, Rex mpoulin@usa.com wrote: > Hi Rex, > > I see some difficulties in understanding the phrase: "the service > results meet participant needs in a Real World Effect". Before, I > understood that the Real World Effect was the result of the service > execution. That is, the Real World Effect itself may or may not meet > the participant needs. The Real World Effect may have much wider > effect than just the result returned to the participant as a response > to its request, yes, the Real World Effect does not exist on its own, IMO: > > <<for ensuring that the service results meet participant needs in a > Real World Effect>> > > In the Ken's edition: > > <<for ensuring that the service results meet participant needs as > manifest in Real World Effects>> > > I guess the word 'manifest' should be read as 'manifested'. Am I correct? > > - Michael > > -----Original Message----- > From: Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com> > To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org RA <soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org> > Sent: Fri, Apr 30, 2010 2:13 am > Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3.1 Rewrite > > Hi Everyone, > > This is my first shot at rewriting Section 3.1. I have one main > consideration that I wasn't sure about. Does Section 3.1 refer only to > Subsections in 3.1, or does it also refer to Sections 3.2, 3.3, etc? I > dealt only with issues in Section 3.1-3.1.4.1. > > I deleted the example in the 3.1 because I thought it muddied rather > than clarified issues when what is needed is to set the stage for the > discussion of Actors, Action, Joint Action and Communication as Joint > Action. It tended to get the reader engaged with explanatory details > immediately and for me that was a distracting rather than clarifying. > > However, in rereading the whole section, I felt strongly that the > explanation of Service Action as a specific kind of Action and the > Counts-As logical equivalence needs an example that we all agree shows > these critical elements clearly. > > Cheers, > Rex > > -- Rex Brooks > President, CEO > Starbourne Communications Design > GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison > Berkeley, CA 94702 > Tel: 510-898-0670 > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that > generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: > https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php -- Rex Brooks President, CEO Starbourne Communications Design GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison Berkeley, CA 94702 Tel: 510-898-0670
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