Re: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3 revision

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

Thanks Frank,

I'm looking forward to getting back in gear.

Cheers,
Rex

Francis McCabe wrote:
> Although I have done more edits since 6/29, they are no especially significant. However, I will post an absolutely up-to-date snapshot.
> Frank
> On Jul 13, 2010, at 6:08 AM, Rex Brooks wrote:
>
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>> Hi Danny, Frank, Everyone,
>>
>> I have finally managed to clear my plate; begin work on new projects and re-engage ongoing work, which is the slot our RAF occupies in my priorities.
>>
>> So, is this all based on the snapshot as of 6-29-10? I just downloaded that file.
>>
>> I note that Frank's original message below was sent on 6-26-10 which also corresponds to the date of the last previous snapshot before 6-29-10 version I downloaded, and I want to be sure I am looking at the correct snapshot. What I see in the 6-29 snapshot includes the struck-through material.
>>
>> I want to make sure I'm reading and commenting on the same version as everyone else.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Rex
>>
>> Thornton, Danny R (IS) wrote:
>>     
>>> I read through the updates for policies and contracts in Section 3 and
>>> Section 4.  Section 4 policy modifications do incorporate separate
>>> definitions for policy decision and policy enforcement.
>>>
>>> In section 3.1.3, Shared State and Social Facts, Figure 9 has the
>>> labeled association 'perceives' between Participant and Social Fact.  I
>>> would suggest leaving perception as a discussion for Section 3.2.3,
>>> Trust and Risk.  One thing that raising a teenager teaches is that a
>>> person's perception of facts is often as unique as a fingerprint. It
>>> did not seem appropriate to discuss this in section 3.1.3.
>>>
>>> Section 3 and Section 4 duplicate the text on Permission and Obligation.
>>> I would remove the discussion of permissions and obligations from
>>> Section 3 and leave it in Section 4 and update Figure 10 and Figure 47
>>> accordingly.  
>>> Danny
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Francis McCabe [mailto:fmccabe@gmail.com] Sent: Saturday, June 26, 2010 1:43 PM
>>> To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org RA
>>> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3 revision
>>>
>>> I have 'gone through' section 3 reorganizing it and adjusting quite a
>>> lot of the text. I have added a preliminary version of architectural implications. There
>>> is likely to be further 'stuff' in this section.
>>>
>>> Occasionally, I felt that a slightly radical edit was required. In that
>>> case I kept the original text but with strike-through.
>>>
>>> Some diagrams will need to be updated. I have left comments where I
>>> could to signal the required change.
>>>
>>> Frank
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