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Subject: RE: Issue - Typographical - Franchise Model description - closed
Agreed - Thanks Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU SERVICES Lovelace Road, Bracknell,
Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637
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may be privileged. Fujitsu Services does not guarantee that this e-mail has not
been intercepted and amended or that it is virus-free. From: Peter F Brown
[mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com] Nig: Taken on board. I propose re-wording the phrase as: "Working across and beyond government to manage…" No further action proposed Peter From:
Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com] Line 754 I
believe the brackets around “and beyond” should be removed. The external
stakeholders in the model should be a major constituency (see line 757)and the
brackets diminish their apparent importance. Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU SERVICES Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637 Mob : +44 (0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: nig.greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com Fujitsu Services Limited, Registered in England no 96056,
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