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Subject: RE: [tgf] Issue 5 - Conceptual - Market Growth - open
Chris Parker Managing Partner, CS Transform +44 7951 754060 From: John Borras <johnaborras@yahoo.co.uk> Sent: 28 February 2011 17:46 To: peter@peterfbrown.com <peter@peterfbrown.com>; 'TGF TC List ' <tgf@lists.oasis-open.org> Subject: RE: [tgf] Issue 5 - Conceptual - Market Growth - open +1 John From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com]
Nig: I’m OK with your proposed re-wording. Comments from other TC members? Peter From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com]
Line 253 All interested parties should be able to participate – this is what the franchise model is about. Also the last clause has a wor missing. I suggest replacing it with “….- so build
“customer franchises” that enable the market and others to work with you to deliver jointly-owned objectives.” Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU SERVICES Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637
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