[tm-pubsubj] Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Comments required

[Mary Nishikawa <nisikawa@fuchinobe.oilfield.slb.com>]

Hi Bernard,

In reply to your request --


>Instead of the first sentences of the first and second paragraphs we can 
>say this to start:
>
>The primary goal of this OASIS Topic Maps Published Subjects Technical 
>Committee is  to promote topic map inter-operability by providing 
>recommendations for  defining and identifying subjects represented by 
>topics in topic maps, standardized in ISO/IEC 13250:2002.  People as well 
>as applications will be able to  "find" what the abstract representations 
>point to:

Bernard you can change this to

>real subjects in the real world. Subjects defined and identified as such 
>are called published subjects.

subjects that you can talk about. Subjects defined and identified as such 
are called published subjects.


Cheers,
Mary 


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