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[wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com]

All --

As we're all reviewing wd24 for Friday's vote, I found some dangling
references to Part Two and Part Three. Not all references are a problem -
ones that show the structure and contents and identify a future version are
good, in fact. So I touched only the ones that I thought were serious
issues.

This is the PDF of the very lightly edited WD25, identified as wd25-wip1
(work in progress 1).

To produce this I accepted all of the mechanical changes (the updated Table
of Contents, page footer, etc) and in the PDF show the changes listed below
to improve references to Part Two and Part Three so we can go for Public
Review and not have to change that text.

The changes to look for (in red; if another color is better for you let me
know) are in the following places:

* Abstract and Heading page 1
* 368-370
* 1388-1390
* 1751 (updated change log)

I also discovered a bad reference at line 1188, and that there was no Table
of Figures - since the figures are only in the Appendixes I don't think
that's important.

Thanks!

bill cox

 -- William Cox

The document revision named ws-calendar-spec-v1.0-wd25-wip1-diff.pdf has
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Document Description:
Minor changes to WD24 to limit references to Parts Two and Three. List is
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