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Subject: Comments on latest working drafts
I think all of my comments below are editorial. I hope
these can be addressed for the documents that go up for the CD ballot. Many
thanks to the editors for getting these done over the holidays. Both documents Copyright needs to be updated to 2006 in OASIS boilerplate
and footers Namespace should be updated (I’ll start a separate thread
on this) Schema and WSDL
WS-RM Policy WD 03 Looks good other than the above. WS-RM WD 08 Line numbers from the diff bar version Section 2.4, first paragraph after bullets, line 247: “Should
the acknowledgement…” should be “Should an acknowledgement…” Section 3.1, line 274: “Note, offering…”
this sounds like it is trying to make the following text non-normative. Suggest
changing to “Note that offering…” to prevent that
interpretation. Section 5, line 814: WS-Trust missing a reference (would
be non-normative as WS-SecureConversation is). Section 6, line 893: URI date is wrong, it should be January
2005 Section 6, line 926: SecureConversation date is wrong, it
should be February 2005 Marc Goodner Technical Diplomat Microsoft Corporation Tel: (425) 703-1903 Blog: http://spaces.msn.com/members/mrgoodner/
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