Re: [wsdm] RE: MUWS 0.5change document- clarity updates

[Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>]

William

Actually, my day is going better than I had anticipated and I'll likely 
have time to finish the rest of my edits and pass them along this afternoon.

Regards,

Mark

Vambenepe, William N wrote:

>Mark,
> 
>Considering the value of your suggested improvements, I think it's worth
>waiting until Monday. If you can send me your corrections by 4:00
>Pacific time I should be able to have the final version out that
>evening.
> 
>I'll leave the line numbers unless a majority of other people weigh in
>between now and Monday to indicate that they'd rather have them removed.
> 
>Regards,
> 
>William
>
>	-----Original Message-----
>	From: Mark Ellison [mailto:ellison@ieee.org] 
>	Sent: Friday, April 02, 2004 7:40 AM
>	To: Vambenepe, William N
>	Cc: wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
>	Subject: Re: [wsdm] RE: MUWS 0.5change document- clarity updates
>	
>	
>	William,
>	
>	...your welcome!  I'm happy to work through the remainder of
>sections, but may be unable to do another read through before Monday.
>Hope that's not too late.
>	
>	I'm ambivalent about removing the numbering, especially for the
>0.5 release.  The numbering makes it easier to correlate problems
>reported on the document.
>	
>	Regards,
>	
>	Mark
>	
>	Vambenepe, William N wrote:
>	
>
>		Thanks a lot Mark, you did a great job. Re-reading the
>spec now I
>		understand better what I have written... ;-)
>		
>		I implemented 99% of your comments. I also included
>updated WSDL and XSD
>		sent by Igor.
>		
>		I am looking forward to the rest of your corrections
>Mark. If possible,
>		please tomorrow work off of the document I just checked
>in for
>		everything below 4.2.1:
>	
>http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/download.php/6202/cd-w
>		sdm-muws-0.5.doc
>		
>		Also, I am thinking of removing line numbering in the
>final version. It
>		is great for reviews but not useful for final spec since
>some people
>		will get it in HTML, PDF, Word, printed in a book, etc.
>So people
>		shouldn't rely on line numbers, and usually don't when
>they use specs,
>		they use section numbers. If someone really wants line
>numbers in let me
>		know, otherwise I'll remove them in tomorrow's (final)
>version.
>		
>		Regards,
>		
>		William
>		
>		
>		  
>
>			-----Original Message-----
>			From: Mark Ellison [mailto:ellison@ieee.org] 
>			Sent: Thursday, April 01, 2004 8:14 PM
>			To: Vambenepe, William N;
>wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
>			Subject: MUWS 0.5change document- clarity
>updates
>			
>			
>			Hi,
>			
>			I made it through sxn 4.2.1.  page 19....
>			
>			Regards,
>			
>			Mark
>			
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