WS-Topics issue reviews

["Murray, Bryan P." <bryan.murray@hp.com>]

During the 5 Dec. call I was asked to verify the text for issues 4.2,
4.23, 4.24. I noticed on the list that all of these issues have been
verified. I decided to look at the text for these issues anyway.

I agree that 4.23 and 4.24 are OK.

Issue 4.2 deals with text in section 7. I think that section 7
adequately describes how a root topic is transformed into a TopicSet
document. However, I am not sure it is obvious to someone that has not
been a part of the TC how a non-root topic is transformed into a
TopicSet document. A sub-topic would be a child element of its parent
topic. I think an example might help demonstrate this fairly complex
transformation.

Bryan