[wsrf] WSRF PR2 comments from Fujitsu

[Hiro Kishimoto <hiro.kishimoto@jp.fujitsu.com>]

Hi all,

Fujitsu has done review of WSRF specification series PR 02 and found
the following issues.

Thanks,
-- 
Hiro Kishimoto

(1) WS-ResourceProperties 1.2 PR Draft 02
     Page 38 line 1447 and page 39 line 1489 refer to TopicExpression
     defined in WS-Topic but WS-Topics is pre-TC status.
     We think it is inappropriate to normatively refer from this
     document to pre-TC status specification.

(2) WS-ResourceProperties 1.2 PR Draft 02
     Namespace "wsnt:" is defined nowhere in this document.

(3) WS-ResourceProperties 1.2 PR Draft 02
     9.1 Normative reference should not include [WS-Topic].
     Also, this URL and hyperlink associated to it are incorrect.

(4) WS-ResourceProperties 1.2 PR Draft 02
     Embetted multi-line hyperlinks (e.g. for [WS-BaseFault])
     on page 42 do not work (Adobe Reader 7.0.5).

(5) WS-ResourceLifetime 1.2 PR Draft 02
     Page 18 line 486 refers to [WS-Topics] but WS-Topics is
     pre-TC status.

(6) WS-ResourceLifetime 1.2 PR Draft 02
     8.1 Normative reference should not include [WS-Topic].
     This URL and hyperlink associated to it are incorrect.

(7) WS-ResourceLifetime 1.2 PR Draft 02
     URL and hyperlink for [WS-BaseNotification], [WS-BaseFault],
     [WS-Resource], and [WS-ResourceProperties] are incorrect on
     page 20.

(8) WS-BaseFaults 1.2 PR Draft 02
     URL and hyperlink for [WS-Resource] are incorrect on page 20.

(9) WS-ServiceGroup 1.2 PR Draft 02
     Page 22 line 627 refers to [WS-Topics] but WS-Topics is
     pre-TC status.

(10) WS-ServiceGroup 1.2 PR Draft 02
     10.1 Normative reference should not include [WS-Topic].
     This URL and hyperlink associated to it are incorrect.

(11) WS-ServiceGroup 1.2 PR Draft 02
     Embetted multi-line hyperlinks (e.g. for [WS-ResourceLifetime])
     on page 27 do not work (Adobe Reader 7.0.5).

(12) WSRF-TC home page
     "Application Notes (AppNotes) is listed as one of public review
     specification.
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=wsrf