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Subject: FW: Re: [wsrm] Edting Draft 1.01F posted as contribution
I made the updates described below and posted as Contribution 1.01G. http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/7153/Contribution-EditingDraft101G.sxw --Pete ----- Forwarded message from Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> ----- Date: Tue, 08 Jun 2004 17:18:19 -0400 From: Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> To: Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com> Subject: Re: [wsrm] Edting Draft 1.01F posted as contribution Pete, can you update the open office file 1.01F yourself to do these fixes, and post it as a contribution in the next few minutes? Tom Rutt Pete Wenzel wrote: >Tom, here are a couple more small edits (line numbers against 1.01F): > >19-22: Replace comment instructions (see attached email). >Bottom Margin: Remove center tab-stop and extra tab from first line of > footer; then the date will be right-justified properly, rather than > on a new line. >29+: Table of Contents page numbering is off; remember to update it > after switching change-tracking display on or off each time. >17: Figure 6 is out of alignment; double click on the > wsrm:SequenceReplies and wsrm:ReplyRange frames to bring up > properties, then "ok", and they will snap back to the right size. > Move cardinality legend up a few lines so it all stays on the same > page and eliminates the following blank page. Maybe link together > all the individual frames to lock everything in place? >240, 1233: Duplicate period. > >--Pete >Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com> >Senior Architect, SeeBeyond >Standards & Product Strategy >+1-626-471-6311 (US-Pacific) > > > >------------------------------------------------------------------------ > >Subject: >Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-05-26.pdf uploaded >From: >Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com> >Date: >Tue, 1 Jun 2004 15:48:39 -0700 >To: >wsrm@lists.oasis-open.org > >To: >wsrm@lists.oasis-open.org > > >I agreed to locate boilerplate text that describes the new OASIS >comment procedure. The OpenOffice samples > >http://www.oasis-open.org/spectools/docs/spectools-openoffice-sample-draft-03.sxw >http://www.oasis-open.org/spectools/docs/spectools-openoffice-sample-draft-03.pdf > >are the most recently updated documents in the SpecTools section, >and indicate that the two sentences that begin "Others should ..." >(at lines 19-22 of WS-Reliability 0.999) should be replaced with: > > Others should use the comment form at > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/comments/form.php?wg_abbrev=wsrm. > >[Note that the final period is not part of the URL.] > -- ---------------------------------------------------- Tom Rutt email: tom@coastin.com; trutt@us.fujitsu.com Tel: +1 732 801 5744 Fax: +1 732 774 5133 ----- End forwarded message -----
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