Re: FW: Re: [wsrm] Edting Draft 1.01F posted as contribution

[Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>]

Thus spoke Pete Wenzel (pete@seebeyond.com) on Tue, Jun 08, 2004 at 02:37:22PM -0700:
> I made the updates described below and posted as Contribution 1.01G.
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/7153/Contribution-EditingDraft101G.sxw

I fixed the hyperlink URLs on the title page after uploading the
initial revision.  The latest draft is now
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/7155/Contribution-EditingDraft101G.sxw
 
--Pete

> ----- Forwarded message from Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> -----
> 
> Date: Tue, 08 Jun 2004 17:18:19 -0400
> From: Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com>
> To: Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>
> Subject: Re: [wsrm] Edting Draft 1.01F posted as contribution
> 
> Pete, can you update the open office file 1.01F yourself to do these 
> fixes, and post it as a contribution
> in the next few minutes?
> 
> Tom Rutt
> 
> Pete Wenzel wrote:
> 
> >Tom, here are a couple more small edits (line numbers against 1.01F):
> >
> >19-22: Replace comment instructions (see attached email).
> >Bottom Margin: Remove center tab-stop and extra tab from first line of
> > footer; then the date will be right-justified properly, rather than
> > on a new line.
> >29+: Table of Contents page numbering is off; remember to update it
> > after switching change-tracking display on or off each time.
> >17: Figure 6 is out of alignment; double click on the
> > wsrm:SequenceReplies and wsrm:ReplyRange frames to bring up
> > properties, then "ok", and they will snap back to the right size.
> > Move cardinality legend up a few lines so it all stays on the same
> > page and eliminates the following blank page.  Maybe link together
> > all the individual frames to lock everything in place?
> >240, 1233: Duplicate period.
> >
> >--Pete
> >Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>
> >Senior Architect, SeeBeyond
> >Standards & Product Strategy
> >+1-626-471-6311 (US-Pacific)
> > 
> >
> >
> >------------------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> >Subject:
> >Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-05-26.pdf uploaded
> >From:
> >Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>
> >Date:
> >Tue, 1 Jun 2004 15:48:39 -0700
> >To:
> >wsrm@lists.oasis-open.org
> >
> >To:
> >wsrm@lists.oasis-open.org
> >
> >
> >I agreed to locate boilerplate text that describes the new OASIS
> >comment procedure.  The OpenOffice samples
> >
> >http://www.oasis-open.org/spectools/docs/spectools-openoffice-sample-draft-03.sxw
> >http://www.oasis-open.org/spectools/docs/spectools-openoffice-sample-draft-03.pdf
> >
> >are the most recently updated documents in the SpecTools section,
> >and indicate that the two sentences that begin "Others should ..."
> >(at lines 19-22 of WS-Reliability 0.999) should be replaced with:
> >
> > Others should use the comment form at
> > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/comments/form.php?wg_abbrev=wsrm.
> >
> >[Note that the final period is not part of the URL.]
> >
> 
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