work product review

[Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>]

The following issues have been identified in the submitted work  
products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org 
  and the Public Review announced to the membership:

1. Please reprocess Docbook using XSLs from latest version of the  
toolkit (waiting for Ken to send me the zip tonight/tomorrow). The  
styles and layout are incorrect.

2. Status (Committee Draft 01) must be on a separate line

3. Date must be on a separate line

4. Document identifier: please remove. Not part of the template.

5. Specification URIs: See templates for style (docs.oasis-open.org/templates/ 
)
Need This Version, Previous Version and Latest Version; all 3 document  
formats, one of which is declared as Authoritative; i.e.
This Version:
    http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/cd01/xrd-1.0-cd01.html
    http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/cd01/xrd-1.0-cd01.xml  
(Authoritative)
    http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/cd01/xrd-1.0-cd01.pdf
Previous Version:
	N/A
  Latest Version:
   http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/xrd-1.0.html
   http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/xrd-1.0.xml
   http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/xrd-1.0.pdf

6. Technical Committee Section requires hypertext link to TC homepage:
  http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=xri

7. Chairs:
Since Yahoo! is not an organizational member, the company name cannot  
appear

7. Abstract Section must appear after Related Work Section

8. Related Work section should include hypertext links to  
specification locations

9. Ensure appropriate footer information is incorporated in PDF output  
(this is included in the updated xslts)

10. Section 1.3 should be entitled Non-Normative References rather  
than Informative References

11. In the Participants section, the following changes must be made:
Joseph Holsten: delete - not in the current roster
Nika Jones: remove company name; not an organizational member
Breno de Medeiros: delete - not on the current roster
William Tan: delete - not on the current roster
Gabe Wachob: remove company name; not an organizational member

Additionally, a namespace document must be supplied (see http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/namespace.html 
)


Regards,

Mary

Mary P McRae
Director, Standards Development
Technical Committee Administrator
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
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