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Subject: RE: Notes on Websockets WD 03

Thanks for your detailed review Steve. I'll be building a WD04 soon which incorporate these suggestions along with other review comments. There are also a couple of technical errors in WD03 that I’ll work with the other editors to resolve in WD04.




-----Original Message-----
From: Steve Huston [mailto:shuston@riverace.com]
Sent: 19 September 2013 03:54
To: David Ingham; Rob Dolin (MS OPEN TECH); Robert Godfrey
Cc: amqp-bindmap@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Notes on Websockets WD 03


Hi guys,


I have noted the following on the web wd 03 document:


- Abstract, 2nd para, 2nd sentence - sub-protocols should be subprotocols Same in sect 3.1 4th para, sect 5.1 2nd para, sect 5.2 2nd para, sect 7 1st para


- Sect 1, 2nd para, 2nd sentence - "in-turn" should be "in turn"


- Sect 1, 3rd para, 1st bullet - "pass-through" should be "pass through"


- Sect 1, 4th para, "Web Sockets" should be "WebSocket"


- Sect 1.2, 1st item - it looks like there's an odd character inside the [AMQP]


- Sect 2.1, 3rd and 4th para - one says protocol, the other says sub-protocol. Which is it? If the latter, should be subprotocol. (I know [XMPPWS] says sub-protocol -it's wrong ;-)


- Sect 2.2, 2nd para "there MAY be potentiallyŠ" is redundant; remove "potentially"


- Sect 2.3 - why are the 2 HTTP example sequences labeled as Figures, but the figure in sect 1 isn't and the protocol visualization in this section isn't? Same question for section 3.4, 4.1, 4.2, 6.1 (additionally, sect

6.1 labels them Figure X and Figure Y instead of real numbers)


- Sect 3 - the sentence would be clearer written as a set of bullets, such


To establish a connection:

1. open the WebSocket Protocol connection 2. perform a SASL authentication exchange, and 3. open the AMQP connection.

The following sections explain these steps.


- Sect 5.1 - para 1 and 3 are almost the same except for AMQP type code value. Which one is it?  Para 2 and 4 seem pretty close too.

Sect 5.2 has the same issue.


- Sect 6, 2nd para, 3rd sentence - what is a "majority finished transmission"?


- Sect 7 has a TODO label - what to do with this?


- Sect 8 - can this be resolved between CSD and CS?





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