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Subject: Re: [amqp] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (AMQP-45) Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review


Sorry, this should be correct now.

--Rafael

On 01/20/2012 04:58 PM, Steve Huston wrote:
Not to be a nit-picker, but my last name is spelled "Huston"
-Steve

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Subject: [amqp] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (AMQP-45) Transactions:
Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review


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Rafael Schloming commented on AMQP-45:
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Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, 4th sentence: Should "outcome of the declare
at
the receiver." be "outcome of the declare from the receiver."?

Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, last sentence: Is there a prescribed error
for this
condition?

RS: Apparently not?
RS: the term Session should be scrubbed from the amqp:illegal-state
description

Part 4, section 4, all 3 bullets in 1st para: Add comma after "i.e."

Part 4, section 4, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: "Part 3: section 4 Delivery
State of
the messaging specification" - remove "Delivery State of the messaging
specification"

Part 4, section 4, 4th para, 1st sentence: Add comma after "i.e."
Also, remove "both"

Part 4, section 4.1, 2nd para: Remove parens from around "successfully"

Part 4, section 4.1, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Add comma after "That is"

Part 4, section 4.2, 1st para, 3rd sentence: change "non discharged" to
"non-
discharged" and do not italicize.

Part 4, section 4.2, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Change "controller initiated"
to "controller-initiated" and "resource initiated" to
"resource-initiated".
Also, change hyphen between "controller" and "i.e." to an em-dash and add
a comma after "i.e.".

RS: How do I do an em-dash? -- Use comma instead.
Like this: "by the controller, i.e., the resource"

Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 1st sentence: add a comma after "i.e." and
a
comma after the closing paren.

Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 2nd sentence: "complete the sending" should
be
"complete sending" ?

Part 4, section 4.4, 2nd sentence: transpose "therefore" and "can"

Part 4, section 4.4.2, 1st sentence: Change "Here we consider" to "This
section considers"

Part 4, section 4.4.2, 2nd sentence: Change "see Transactional
Acquisition" to
"see section 4.4.3"

Part 4, section 5.2, global-id, 1st sentence: "MUST be associated work
with"
should be "MUST be associated with".
2nd sentence: "txn-id will associated work with" should be "txn-id will be
associated with"

Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review
--------------------------------------------------------------

                 Key: AMQP-45
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-45
             Project: OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
            Reporter: Rafael Schloming
            Assignee: Rafael Schloming


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