RE: [amqp] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (AMQP-45) Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review

["Steve Huston" <shuston@riverace.com>]

Not to be a nit-picker, but my last name is spelled "Huston"
-Steve

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> Subject: [amqp] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (AMQP-45) Transactions:
> Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review
>
>
>     [ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-
> 45?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-
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> Rafael Schloming commented on AMQP-45:
> --------------------------------------
>
> Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, 4th sentence: Should "outcome of the declare 
> at
> the receiver." be "outcome of the declare from the receiver."?
>
> Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, last sentence: Is there a prescribed error 
> for this
> condition?
>
> RS: Apparently not?
> RS: the term Session should be scrubbed from the amqp:illegal-state
> description
>
> Part 4, section 4, all 3 bullets in 1st para: Add comma after "i.e."
>
> Part 4, section 4, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: "Part 3: section 4 Delivery 
> State of
> the messaging specification" - remove "Delivery State of the messaging
> specification"
>
> Part 4, section 4, 4th para, 1st sentence: Add comma after "i.e."
> Also, remove "both"
>
> Part 4, section 4.1, 2nd para: Remove parens from around "successfully"
>
> Part 4, section 4.1, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Add comma after "That is"
>
> Part 4, section 4.2, 1st para, 3rd sentence: change "non discharged" to 
> "non-
> discharged" and do not italicize.
>
> Part 4, section 4.2, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Change "controller initiated"
> to "controller-initiated" and "resource initiated" to 
> "resource-initiated".
> Also, change hyphen between "controller" and "i.e." to an em-dash and add
> a comma after "i.e.".
>
> RS: How do I do an em-dash? -- Use comma instead.
> Like this: "by the controller, i.e., the resource"
>
> Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 1st sentence: add a comma after "i.e." and 
> a
> comma after the closing paren.
>
> Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 2nd sentence: "complete the sending" should 
> be
> "complete sending" ?
>
> Part 4, section 4.4, 2nd sentence: transpose "therefore" and "can"
>
> Part 4, section 4.4.2, 1st sentence: Change "Here we consider" to "This
> section considers"
>
> Part 4, section 4.4.2, 2nd sentence: Change "see Transactional 
> Acquisition" to
> "see section 4.4.3"
>
> Part 4, section 5.2, global-id, 1st sentence: "MUST be associated work 
> with"
> should be "MUST be associated with".
> 2nd sentence: "txn-id will associated work with" should be "txn-id will be
> associated with"
>
> > Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review
> > --------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> >                 Key: AMQP-45
> >                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-45
> >             Project: OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC
> >          Issue Type: Improvement
> >            Reporter: Rafael Schloming
> >            Assignee: Rafael Schloming
> >
>
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