Re: [bcm] Groups - BCM.TC Agenda.2003-11-10.pdf uploaded

[David RR Webber <david@drrw.info>]

Carl,

Good first stab - moving in right 
direction.

I think this needs more work to 
point up the value proposition to
the audience however.

I liked what we have in the brochure - think
we need more of that in the tri-fold.  The 
diagram works though - I like that - just 
intriguing enough ; -)

Also - we have the BCM logo now - would be good 
put that on first page segment.

Thanks, DW.

Quoting Carl Mattocks <carlmattocks@checkmi.com>:

> Please peruse the first draft of the BCM trifold..
> Hopefully we can reach agreement on required changes by December 1 so that
> OASIS PR folk can complete their review before our XML 2003 open house.
> 
> 
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