brochure

["Neil Wasserman" <nwasserman@adaptiveservices.com>]

FYI, I'm working on an updated brochure, incorporating comments and edits.
(I haven't gotten any requests for big changes yet.)  Thank you to those of
you who have reviewed the document.  I want to a final draft (for OASIS PR
review) by Dec. 1.  

I will try to be on the telcon from 1:00-1:30, at which time I have to go
into a meeting.  

Neil  

-----Original Message-----
From: David RR Webber [mailto:david@drrw.info] 
Sent: Friday, November 21, 2003 11:30 PM
To: carlmattocks@checkmi.com
Cc: BPeat@eProcessSolutions.com; bcm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: [bcm] Groups - BCM.TC Agenda.2003-11-10.pdf uploaded

Carl,

Good first stab - moving in right
direction.

I think this needs more work to
point up the value proposition to
the audience however.

I liked what we have in the brochure - think we need more of that in the
tri-fold.  The diagram works though - I like that - just intriguing enough ;
-)

Also - we have the BCM logo now - would be good put that on first page
segment.

Thanks, DW.

Quoting Carl Mattocks <carlmattocks@checkmi.com>:

> Please peruse the first draft of the BCM trifold..
> Hopefully we can reach agreement on required changes by December 1 so 
> that OASIS PR folk can complete their review before our XML 2003 open
house.
> 
> 
> 
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