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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (CAMP-109) 4.3.1 General Attributes


4.3.1 General Attributes
------------------------

                 Key: CAMP-109
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-109
             Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: Public Review
            Reporter: Gilbert Pilz


Patrick Durusau submitted the following PR comment (https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201309/msg00054.html):

The text of 4.3.1 General Attributes reads:

*****
The following nodes may appear as elements of the Deployment Plan,
Artifact Specifications, or Service Specifications.
*****

Which is puzzling because 4.3 Deployment Plan Schema provides (last
sentence):

*****
Note the description of the structures and
information in this section utilizes YAML's nomenclature.
*****

In addition to needing to be a note, there is a claim that YAML
nomenclature is being used.

I mention that because of:

"...may appear as elements of the..."

YAML does not use the term "elements."

If keeping the hanging paragraph for 4.3.1 General Attributes is
important, I would say:

*****
Deployment Plans, Artifact Specifications and Service Specifications
may contain the nodes defined in 4.3.1 General Attributes.
*****


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