Re: [cgmo-webcgm] WebcgmCD 5.1-5.6 review

[Lofton Henderson <lofton@rockynet.com>]

All suggestions implemented/fixed, EXCEPT:

>5.4.1.3
>line 1- looks like a reference is needed in place of "To Do"

We need an example of this in WebCGM, if one exists.  I can't think of any 
such example.  Can anyone else?

Regards,
-Lofton.

At 11:56 AM 5/6/2005 -0500, Don Larson wrote:
>All,
>
>Here is my review of Webcgm CD 5.1-5.6. I didn't find anything major 
>technically
>incorrect. Many of my comments are suggestions to improve readability and
>use consistent nomenclature.
>
>------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>5.1
>   suggestion to improve readability-
>
>   line 1 delete "DOM"
>   line 2 change "is to allow" to "enables"
>            delete "to"
>
>e.g.-
>
>This chapter defines a set of objects and interfaces for accessing and 
>manipulating WebCGM documents. The functionality
>specified in this section enables script writers to manipulate WebCGM 
>documents and access information found in standard
>WebCGM XML companion files.
>
>
>5.3
>   line 3  for consistent nomenclature change "tooltips" to "screentips"
>
>   line 7, insert "a" after "provides"
>
>   Page 58, line 1 of text below the Example 5.1.b should refer to 
> "example 5.1b"
>
>   Page 59, line 8 should read
>         3. An attribute that already exists on the corresponding APS must 
> be updated with the new attribute value.
>
>5.4.1.3
>   line 1- looks like a reference is needed in place of "To Do"
>
>5.4.2.1
>    line 3- is something needed here for "chapter on inheritance to be done"
>
>5.5
>
>  Delimited WebCGMStrings
>    line 2 (  change "ex:" to "e.g."
>    line 4- a reference to "see 3.2.3" was suggested in emails pertaining 
> to string.
>    line 10- the comment "Need a link for ValidChar" suggest that a 
> reference or something needed here.
>
>5.6
>
>   Example 2 line 3- change "24" to 25.4"
>   Example 3 line 1- for clarity enclose s in () e.g.
>         Scale Factor is 'metric', (s), then
>
>5.7
>   line 10- change "allows to handle"  to "enables the handling of"
>
>   ps. I think I went past end of my assignment but included anyway.
>
>
>Regards,
>Don.