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Subject: RE: Review first chapters
yes, and here we go again with attachment... > -----Original Message----- > From: Dieter Weidenbrück [mailto:dieter@itedo.com] > Sent: Wednesday, August 31, 2005 11:16 AM > To: 'Lofton Henderson' > Cc: 'cgmo-webcgm@lists.oasis-open.org' > Subject: Review first chapters > > Lofton, > > I did a review of the first chapters. I still need to work on > 4 thru 6, but I don't have the time right now. > > Mostly typos and small things, only one real issue as far as > I can see, which are the picture behaviors > > Language and punctuation related comments may be wrong, if > so, forgive me. > > Comments welcome. > > Regards, > Dieter >
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