RE: Review first chapters

[Dieter Weidenbrück <dieter@itedo.com>]

yes, and here we go again with attachment... 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dieter Weidenbrück [mailto:dieter@itedo.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, August 31, 2005 11:16 AM
> To: 'Lofton Henderson'
> Cc: 'cgmo-webcgm@lists.oasis-open.org'
> Subject: Review first chapters
> 
> Lofton,
> 
> I did a review of the first chapters. I still need to work on 
> 4 thru 6, but I don't have the time right now.
> 
> Mostly typos and small things, only one real issue as far as 
> I can see, which are the picture behaviors
> 
> Language and punctuation related comments may be wrong, if 
> so, forgive me.
> 
> Comments welcome.
> 
> Regards,
> Dieter
>

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