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Subject: Review first chapters

From: Dieter Weidenbrück <dieter@itedo.com>
To: "'Lofton Henderson'" <lofton@rockynet.com>
Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2005 11:15:33 +0200

Lofton,

I did a review of the first chapters. I still need to work on 4 thru 6, but
I don't have the time right now.

Mostly typos and small things, only one real issue as far as I can see,
which are the picture behaviors

Language and punctuation related comments may be wrong, if so, forgive me.

Comments welcome.

Regards,
Dieter