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Subject: Re: [cgmo-webcgm] Action item completed, review of Model Profile column in Chapter 6
I incorporated all of the copious fixes (to the MP column of the PPF) that Rob highlighted in his attachment. You will see these in the Editor's Draft that I will post soon. To my amazement, I think this leads to zero substantive changes -- it's all editorial. Basically, the WebCGM 1.0 PPF was based on the text of CGM:1992 Amendment 2. When that text was integrated into CGM:1999, some things were shuffled around and some formatting was touched up. E.g., a lot of section reference numbers changed. And the tables of section 16, "Binary encoding rules" (precisions, etc), were integrated into the main tables. There were a couple of sections missing altogether, and they have been added: T.26.11 -- Transparency (element) -- no substantive changes, since it was prohibited in 1.0. T.26.12 -- INTERPRETATION OF STRUCTURES AND DIRECTORIES -- other than a mysterious statement about "produce the correct graphical results", this just says to obey the rules in 3.2.1.1 - 3.2.1.5 I will have a look at improving some formatting, per Rob's comments #1 - #3 (below). I haven't yet processed Dave's comments on col.1 and col.2 of the PPF. Regards, -Lofton. At 05:51 PM 9/27/2005 -0600, Robert Orosz wrote: >Lofton, > >This (lengthy, I'm afraid) report completes an Action Item that I undertook >to review the Model profile column of the PPF for accuracy. For reference, >this is the email where I raised the question about the accuracy of that >column in the PPF. > >http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/cgmo-webcgm/200508/msg00052.html > >In short, I found a mess. There are obsolete tables, tables with missing >rows, etc. The good news is that I think it is a manageable mess. I don't >believe that I've found any substantial problems beyond what we've already >discussed. It's mostly a matter of getting the language updated to the >current version of the Model profile. In some cases it is even simpler than >that, I've also flagged some style differences, e.g. Bold Italic text in the >original Model profile showing up as plain text, etc. > >First though, I have some comments relating to our HTML formatted version of >the PPF. > >1) The deprecated bgcolor attribute is used on the TD element to generate >the black color that marks the top of each row in the Model profile column >of the PPF. Purists might object to this. If so, another style could be >added to the local style element to handle this. I could not find a way to >get Amaya to add the bgcolor attribute, and I had to edit the file by hand >to add it where I needed it. The rest of the editing was done in Amaya, as >explained below. > >2) Some of the Model profile information in the current Model profile is in >tables; i.e. a table inside the PPF cell. In the HTML version, this is free >form and difficult to read, especially with proportional fonts. I've have >made notes where this occurs, however, I don't know enough about HTML (i.e. >if nested tables are allowed) to propose a solution. In any case, I believe >this only occurs where WebCGM 2.0 differs from the Model profile; i.e. users >won't have to read the Model profile column to get the WebCGM 2.0 >requirements. We can probably leave this alone. > >3) The current Model profile uses the ballot box with check (U+2611) and >ballot box characters to indicate the Model profile requirement (Required, >Permitted or Prohibited) and possible alternatives. In the HTML version, >these characters are replaced with "Yes," and "No" respectively. I presume >this was done so that the Latin-1 character set could be used in the HTML >file. However, this initially caused me some confusion because my brain >turned these into attributes with an implied and operator between them >(because they are all listed). Consider this: >ColourClass: Required Yes; Permitted No; >Huh? How can something be required, and yet at the same time not permitted?? >I propose an additional explanatory paragraph in Section 6.1. You'll see it >in the attachment. > >Finally, my report. I used Amaya to edit the HTML version of CD2. I marked >my changes with the .editorial style. It doesn't show up as well as the >.issue style, but there was already text that used the .issue style. I >wanted to avoid confusion. I then converted the edited HTML into PDF, so >that I could attach additional explanatory comments. In particular, there >are summary notes at the beginning of each section. > >Disclaimer: Along the way, I noticed some mistakes in columns 1 and 2, and >corrected them appropriately. However, my review focused on column 3, so I >did not do a comprehensive review of columns 1 and 2. There will be places >where text in column 2 needs to be updated to match the updated Model >profile text in column 3. > >Regards, > >Rob > > <<WebCGM20-Profile.pdf>>
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