[CMIS 1.1 Draft Review] CMIS 1.1 Working Draft 01b: comments on pp.200-end Chap. 6

[Jane Doong <jku@us.ibm.com>]

My comments from pp. 200 - end of Chapter 6. Thx.

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pg.213. 3.5.1 Feeds.
TYPO in atom:updated. "MUSTbe" => "MUST be"

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pg.214. 3.5.1 Feeds.
TYPOs. in last paragraph before 3.5.2:
"certian"
"theorderBy"

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pg.221 3.7.1.1 URI Templates
Some of the example boxes have text running off the page.

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pg.225 3.8.1 Root Folder Collection
Semantics. Remove extra " is ":

"This is collection provides access to the children of the root folder. Please"

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pg.233 3.8.4.1 HTTP POST
TYPO in 3rd paragraph. "The the " => "The "

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pg.244 3.9.2.2 HTTP POST
=> POSTing an Atom Entry document with CMIS markup:

Since the following applies to createFolder, the parenthesis should also include "folder":

"If the Atom entry has a CMIS property cmis:objectId that is valid for the repository,
the object (document<INSERT>, folder,</INSERT> or policy) will be added to the folder."

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pg.278 3.10.6.1 HTTP GET
Consistency. The Link Relations lists "down" link before "up" link. Everywhere else "up" is before "down".

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pg.323 5.4.2.12 Selector "contentChanges"

The Arguments for "contentChanges" does not look right, they look like arguments for "query":

Original text:
- q
- maxItems
- skipCount
- includeAllowableActions
- includeRelationships
- renditionFilter

Suggested text:
- changeLogToken
- includeProperties
- includePolicyIds
- includeACL
- maxItems

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pg.358 5.4.5 Browser Binding Examples

All the subsection headings under browser binding examples look wrong. The first subsetion should be 5.4.5.1:

5.4.5 Browser Binding Examples
5.4.5.0.2.3 Getting Repository Info
5.4.5.0.2.4 Getting Folder Children
...

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pg.375 Chapter 6
=> Clients

TYPO: Remove "either", now that there are 3 bindings:

"Client implementations MAY implement <DELETE>either</DELETE> the AtomPub Binding or the Web Services
Binding or the Browser Binding."

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