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Subject: Re: [cti] Re: [EXT] Re: [cti] Invitation to comment on TAXII v2.1 - ends January 21
- From: "Emily Ratliff" <Emily.Ratliff@ibm.com>
- To: Bret Jordan <Bret_Jordan@symantec.com>
- Date: Fri, 4 Jan 2019 13:45:36 -0600
Thanks, Bret! I have requested access from
within the document so that I can see the comments that you have made.
For the RFC6838 reference, it indeed
appears correctly in the master document, but it appears incorrect in the
review drafts, both in the docx and pdf versions. Either it has already
been fixed in the master document or perhaps it is an error that gets introduced
during the export step.
Appreciate your fast response!
Emily
Emily Ratliff STSM, IBM Security Research Initiative Lead | |
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From:
Bret Jordan <Bret_Jordan@symantec.com>
To:
Emily Ratliff <Emily.Ratliff@ibm.com>,
"cti@lists.oasis-open.org" <cti@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date:
01/03/2019 05:39 PM
Subject:
[cti] Re: [EXT]
Re: [cti] Invitation to comment on TAXII v2.1 - ends January 21
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<cti@lists.oasis-open.org>
Emily,
Thanks for the feedback. I can
see your point about the Figure in 1.3 and I will make a note in the document
to fix that for the next working draft and CSD.
I am not sure what you mean though about
the label of RFC6838. Can you perhaps make a suggestion in the master
document? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EsiWY7TGqt9yH6QUXv4c-opXSr3wR0TDMt8Q0yJjpoo/edit#
For section 1.6.9 I made a suggestion
in the document itself to delete that word. Can you verify that is
what you mean and add a comment to my suggestion if you agree? Also,
if the values are out of order, please make a suggestion to fix.
For section 7, I made a suggestion to
fix that typo.
I think your suggestion for sections
8.1.3 and 8.4.3 are reasonable. I have made a suggestion in the master
document to have those deleted for now. Please review.
The master version of the document can
be viewed at the following URL. If you can not see the comments and
suggestions, please request access from within the document itself. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EsiWY7TGqt9yH6QUXv4c-opXSr3wR0TDMt8Q0yJjpoo/edit#
Thanks
Bret
From: cti@lists.oasis-open.org
<cti@lists.oasis-open.org> on behalf of Emily Ratliff <Emily.Ratliff@ibm.com>
Sent: Thursday, January 3, 2019 2:19:38 PM
To: cti@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [EXT] Re: [cti] Invitation to comment on TAXII v2.1 - ends
January 21
Hi!
I'm a brand new member so I'm reading the TAXII specification for the first
time. I read the PDF version of the TAXII 2.1 Committee Specification Draft
02 / Public Review Draft 01. I found only a couple of minor issues as follows:
clarification Figure 1.3
The object
being passed back is not a response to a recent "Subscribe" message,
so rather than having "Subscribe" next to the message, the graphic
would be clearer if the receivers were labelled "Subscribers"
rather than "Consumers".
format 1.3 Normative
References The label [RFC6838] is in the reference
description field rather than the reference label field.
grammar 1.6.9
The
second sentence refers to Authorization and WWW-Authentication respectively,
but they are out of order so respectively doesn't apply. Recommend dropping
the word respectively.
typo 7
Title sentence has a typo "extent" should
read "extend"
clarification 8.1.3/8.4.3
In the conformance
section, the conformance requirements for Channels are listed as RESERVED.
Without actively participating in the TC, it is difficult to understand
what this means in practice for a server that is otherwise conformant to
the requirements. I would recommend removing these sections until Channels
are defined.
Thanks!
Emily
Emily Ratliff STSM, IBM Security Research Initiative Lead | |
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Phone:1-512-286-9947| Mobile:1-512-653-1052 E-mail: Emily.Ratliff@ibm.com | 11501 Burnet Rd Austin, TX 78758-3400 United States |
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