RE: [dita-adoption] Comments from reviewing task model feature article

OK -- done

JoAnn Hackos PhD

President

Comtech Services, Inc.

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From: Bruce Nevin (bnevin) [mailto:bnevin@cisco.com]
Sent: Monday, June 07, 2010 9:44 AM
To: Gershon Joseph (gerjosep); JoAnn Hackos
Cc: DITA Adoption TC
Subject: RE: [dita-adoption] Comments from reviewing task model feature article

Prerequisite is a single word, not hyphenated, and post-requisite with or without hyphen does not appear in the RH unabridged dictionary.

When referring to sequence of elements, it seems to me best to use element names, e.g.

"the DITA Strict Task Model [...] requires that <prereq> precede <context> in the
<taskbody> [NB: not conbody!] and does not permit titles for <prereq>,

<context>, <result>, or <postreq>."

instead of

               the DITA Strict Task Model [...] requires that pre-requisites precede context in the
                <conbody> and does not permit titles for pre-requisites, context, result, or
                post-requisite content units.

Certainly the conbody copy/paste error should be fixed.

From: Gershon Joseph (gerjosep)
Sent: Monday, June 07, 2010 5:19 AM
To: Joann Hackos
Cc: DITA Adoption TC
Subject: [dita-adoption] Comments from reviewing task model feature article

Hi JoAnn,

Here are my comments (marked up as draft-comments). Nothing major. I think this is ready to approve today with the changes I've requested (and any others other reviewers may suggest).

Gershon

Gershon Joseph
Technical Leader, Engineering
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