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Subject: Feedback about "Lightweight DITA: An Introduction" change-marked draft

  • The subtitle should be "Committee Note 01"
  • The date needs to be the date on which the TC will vote on the committee note: 23 January 2018
  • The file name should be "LwDITA-v1.0-cn01". (The easiest way to handle this is to rename the DITA map.)
  • In "Specification URIs":
  • Use symbols for the revision marking, in addition to color. This is important for TC members who are color blind or who are printing the document out on a black and white printer. I'd look at the DITAVAL files that we use for the errata version of the spec.
  • There are extra spaces before some instances of the word "component".
  • I think changing instances of the word "elements" to "components" makes this document read VERY strangely. I am not on-board with this change, especially when the references are to XDITA or XDITA.

Kristen James Eberlein
Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee
Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting
+1 919 682-2290; kriseberlein (skype)

On 1/18/2018 1:21 PM, Carlos Evia wrote:
Document Name: Lightweight DITA: An Introduction

Marked version with changes implemented after public review #1. Thanks to
Alan Houser for the transform.
Download Latest Revision
Public Download Link

Submitter: Dr. Carlos Evia
Group: OASIS Darwin Information Typing Architecture (DITA) TC
Folder: Drafts
Date submitted: 2018-01-18 10:20:42

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