RE: [docbook-tc] Charter Revision

["Gershon Joseph (gerjosep)" <gerjosep@cisco.com>]

Hi Dick,

Looks good. My only comment applies to the following paragraph:

The OASIS DocBook Technical Committee is chartered to develop and
maintain the DocBook family of specifications and to continue to support
its ever growing user base. In particular, the XML DocBook schema, a
simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

The last sentence is not a complete sentence.  Perhaps we could rewrite
it to say something like:
The TC currently supports the XML DocBook schema, a simplified authoring
subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

I'm not sure about limited the sentence to "supports". Maybe the
following is better:
The TC's deliverables currently include the XML DocBook schema, a
simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

Cheers,
Gershon

-----Original Message-----
From: Dick Hamilton [mailto:rlhamilton@frii.com] 
Sent: Monday, January 19, 2009 11:07 PM
To: 'DocBook Technical Committee'
Subject: [docbook-tc] Charter Revision

I have attached a revision of the charter based on the comments from
last month's TC meeting.

I believe I have incorporated all of the comments; if I missed
something, please let me know.

Regards,
Dick Hamilton
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