Re: [docbook-tc] Charter Revision

[Scott Hudson <scott.hudson@flatironssolutions.com>]

I like the last sentence that Gershon suggested:

The TC's deliverables currently include the XML DocBook schema, a
simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

Best regards,

--Scott

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Gershon Joseph (gerjosep) wrote:
> Hi Dick,
>
> Looks good. My only comment applies to the following paragraph:
>
> The OASIS DocBook Technical Committee is chartered to develop and
> maintain the DocBook family of specifications and to continue to support
> its ever growing user base. In particular, the XML DocBook schema, a
> simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.
>
> The last sentence is not a complete sentence.  Perhaps we could rewrite
> it to say something like:
> The TC currently supports the XML DocBook schema, a simplified authoring
> subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.
>
> I'm not sure about limited the sentence to "supports". Maybe the
> following is better:
> The TC's deliverables currently include the XML DocBook schema, a
> simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.
>
> Cheers,
> Gershon
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dick Hamilton [mailto:rlhamilton@frii.com] 
> Sent: Monday, January 19, 2009 11:07 PM
> To: 'DocBook Technical Committee'
> Subject: [docbook-tc] Charter Revision
>
> I have attached a revision of the charter based on the comments from
> last month's TC meeting.
>
> I believe I have incorporated all of the comments; if I missed
> something, please let me know.
>
> Regards,
> Dick Hamilton
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