[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (DSSX-5) Reword abstract and replace forward reflabel to DSS-Core with expanded reference to that base protocol.

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Reword abstract and replace forward reflabel to DSS-Core with expanded reference to that base protocol. 
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                 Key: DSSX-5
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/DSSX-5
             Project: OASIS Digital Signature Services eXtended (DSS-X) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: Profile Local Signature
    Affects Versions: V1_WD01
            Reporter: Stefan Drees
            Priority: Minor
             Fix For: V1_WD01


In the current revision of the workproduct [localsig-v1.0-wd01-8Nov2012.pdf](https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/47439/localsig-v1.0-wd01-8Nov2012.pdf) the abstracts reads:

"""
This document defines a protocol and processing profiles of [DSSCore], to create document signatures using local signature computation. Finally, it defines transport and security bindings for the protocols.
"""

where  [DSSCore] is a forward reference to the bibliography entry:
"""
[DSSCore] S. Drees et al., Digital Signature Service Core Protocols and Elements, OASIS, April 2007,
        http://docs.oasis-open.org/dss/v1.0/oasis-dss-core-spec-v1.0-os.pdf
"""

I suggest some tweaks to the abstract.
1. replace forward reference with sufficiently expanded name like e.g. "Digital Signature Service Core Protocols and Elements"
2. reword to make it an even better decision point for a curious mind to continue reading the document or skipping it on her way to find the seeked information.

The proposed abstract is only a first of several expected drafts ;-)


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