Re: [dss] DSS Core minor comments

[Trevor Perrin <trevp@trevp.net>]

Thanks, I'll add these in the next version.

Trevor


At 06:58 PM 12/1/2003 +0000, Nick Pope wrote:

>Trevor,
>
>I looking through the Draft 7 of the core protocol I have the following
>minor comments:
>
>Clause 2.6 - I suggest that <Outputs> is renamed to <OptionalOutputs> so
>that it clearly relates to the OptionalInputs and that other outputs exist
>such as <signature> and <result>
>
>Clause 3.4 and 4.5 - In line with above I suggest the title is "Optional
>Inputs and Outputs", and in sub headings Optional Input <xx> Output <yyy>
>
>Clause 5 & 6 - I suggest that these are placed under a title "Common
>Elements" with the introduction:
>"This section contains the definition of XML elements that may be used in
>the DSS Protocol, and may also be used with XML Signatures created or
>verified through the DSS."
>
>Referances [PKIX] - RFC 2459 has been replaced by RFC 3280.  Also, to be
>consistent use [RFC 3280] instead of PKIX.