[Fwd: WG: remarks on ebBP 2.0.1]

["Monica J. Martin" <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>]

>-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
>Von: Ronald van Kuijk [mailto:ronald@jbpm.org]
>Gesendet: Fr 10.12.2004 15:14
>An: Sacha Schlegel
>Cc: david@drrw.info
>Betreff: remarks on ebBP 2.0.1 
> 
>Sacha,
>
>I've been reading up to page 12 now and here are the votes of the dutch jury (where I won't go
>into typos)
>- Paragraphs 6.1 (Key concepts of the ebXML Business Process Specification
>    There should be an image depicting the Business Collaboration, Business Transaction,
>Collaboration Activity, Business Transaction Activity relations. The text is clear but an
>image says more then a thousand words. This image would also add clearity to 6.2.7.1 I think,
>since it is fairly the same subject.
>- Line 402 "sub collaboration" shouldn't that be "collaboration activity"
>- Line 407 "is beyond the scope" isn't that in conflict with line 201 where it says BPMN?
>- 6.2.1 is written to 'hasty' (like it is hushe) take a little more words to describe the
>relations to other standards.
>
>Feedback on my comments is welcome and appreciated.
>  
>
mm1: We have received these comments from Ronald van Kuijk from jbpm. 
I'll bring them up in today's call or the next. Thanks to Sacha for 
working with Ronald.