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Subject: RE: [ebxml-cppa] planning version 1.1 edits: partyName
Jean, The changes look good. However I must apologize for accidentally tripping you up on one point. In line 688, I incorrectly said "the document SHOULD be dereferenced." Of course, it is the value of xlink:href that is dereferenced. The following are alternatives for that sentence. I am happy with either one: Rather, the value of xlink:href SHOULD be dereferenced only when the contents of this document are needed. Rather, this document SHOULD be referred to only when information in it is needed. Regards, Marty ************************************************************************************* Martin W. Sachs IBM T. J. Watson Research Center P. O. B. 704 Yorktown Hts, NY 10598 914-784-7287; IBM tie line 863-7287 Notes address: Martin W Sachs/Watson/IBM Internet address: mwsachs @ us.ibm.com ************************************************************************************* Jean Zheng <Jzheng@vitria.com> on 12/12/2001 01:12:45 PM To: Martin W Sachs/Watson/IBM@IBMUS cc: "'Dale Moberg'" <dmoberg@cyclonecommerce.com>, "'Tony Weida'" <rweida@hotmail.com>, ebxml-cppa@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: RE: [ebxml-cppa] planning version 1.1 edits: partyName Marty, Thank you for your review and suggestions. I've updated the doc based on your suggestions: Cheers, Jean -----Original Message----- From: Martin W Sachs [mailto:mwsachs@us.ibm.com] Sent: Monday, December 03, 2001 7:59 PM To: Jean Zheng Cc: ebxml-cppa@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: Re: [ebxml-cppa] planning version 1.1 edits: partyName Jean, I have some suggestions about the partyName additions. Lines 604-607: Please replace "MAY NOT" by "might not" in line 605. The expression "MAY NOT" is defined by RFC 2119 to refer to something that an implementation is not required to implement. Here, you want an expression of the fact that uniqueness is not guaranteed for partyName. Line 686-687: This statement is too strong for what it is describing. It should be non-normative. Also, it isn't the contents of xlink:href that are being discussed; it is the document referred by partyRef. I suggest the following replacement: The contents of the document referenced by the partyRef element are subject to change at any time. Therefore, they SHOULD NOT be cached for a long period of time. Rather, this document SHOULD be dereferenced only when needed. Regards, Marty **************************************************************************** ********* Martin W. Sachs IBM T. J. Watson Research Center P. O. B. 704 Yorktown Hts, NY 10598 914-784-7287; IBM tie line 863-7287 Notes address: Martin W Sachs/Watson/IBM Internet address: mwsachs @ us.ibm.com **************************************************************************** ********* Jean Zheng <Jzheng@vitria.com> on 11/29/2001 09:27:39 PM To: ebxml-cppa@lists.oasis-open.org cc: Subject: [ebxml-cppa] planning version 1.1 edits: partyName Not sure if this is the best way to distribute changes: I'm using our 1.0 spec as base and the following line numbers are referring to the attached document: line 583, 605-613, 687-688: New addition regarding partyName line 2437, 2573, 2651: added lines to Examples line 2785-2787: added lines to Dtd (I understand that Dtd is going away, I made the changes for the sake of consistency). line 3036-3037: schema All lines are highlighted, too. Thank you for reviewing! Any suggestions at all are welcome! Please do let me know if I missed anything. Jean -----Original Message----- From: Dale Moberg [mailto:dmoberg@cyclonecommerce.com] Sent: Tuesday, November 27, 2001 9:34 AM To: ebxml-cppa@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [ebxml-cppa] Thursday, November 29,CPPA teleconference agenda: planning version 1.1 edits An important meeting for moving forward on emptying the issues database! Please send in additions, though you can see that we have a bountiful harvest already. Call in information: USA Toll Number: +1-712-884-0932 Toll Free Number: 877-719-1163 PASSCODES 305145 LEADER: Mr Brian Hayes Brian's cell phone number: (925) 788-6304 Proposed Agenda: 0. Administrative issues: a. January Face to Face needed? What week can people attend? Where can it be held? b. Writing schedule for December drafts of version 1.1 We need people to take ownership for drafting additions or changes for 1.1 revisions. Tony is on vacation this week, and we will need to find out that he can piece the edits together or whether he wants help. Shall we focus on parceling out tasks based on schema changes? And then add in all the residual tasks? If so, schema updates need to be available for review at the start of December. Arvola? Taking responsibility for sections, means checking examples involving the schema elements, noting any renumbering of sections (try to keep to the minimum), checking cross-references, checking whether other appendices need to be updated. 2. Service and Action naming proposals (Brian and Hima subteams) Using ActionBinding element to store long name and short names for actions. Using ActionBinding for storing Packaging specifics. ActionBinding usage allows specific reference to portions of a BPSS instance that are being agreed to (perhaps reducing need to "filter" out portions of document subject to agreement.) Volunteers for write-up? 3. PerMessage, duplicateElimination, AckRequested, signing, synch (and packaging related distinctions following synch/asynch response apportionment) (Arvola review) Volunteer for write-up? Residual issues: 4. PartyName, PartyRef changes, etc. (Marty and Jean) Volunteers? 5. Arvola Schema Straw Proposal: ready for schema? (Arvola) ActionBinding writeup? Arvola? Peter Ogden will handle writing assignment for CertificateRef related changes and additions. Arvola's "new elements" approach to be used, and not attributes qualifying certificate usages. 6. New SecurityDetails element discussion. Dale Moberg will write up this element. No word yet from XAML TC subgroup on whether policy notations usable in 1.1. Messaging says their policy appendix is probably stable. TrustAnchor element issues. Thanks to Brian Hayes and Commerce One for hosting tomorrow's CPPA teleconference. ---------------------------------------------------------------- To subscribe or unsubscribe from this elist use the subscription manager: <http://lists.oasis-open.org/ob/adm.pl>
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