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Subject: Re: [ekmi] Changes required to submitted document - SKSML
Mary/Kim, since the public review period is done, what would be the next steps? Regards, Anil On 10/21/2010 03:28 PM, Anil Saldhana wrote: > Kim, > I have incorporated the changes and your suggestions. > > The zip is here. > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ekmi/download.php/39943/ekmi_spec_1.zip > > Regards, > Anil > > On 10/12/2010 08:02 AM, Kim Goolsby wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The >> suggestions >> are just that, suggestions only. >> >> Please make the following changes to this document: >> >> 1. On the title page, in 'This Version'& 'Previous Version', the >> underlying >> URIs were not updated correctly. Roll the cursor over these links to >> see the >> problem. >> >> - For 'This Version', please change underlying URIs from >> >> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr02/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxxto >> >> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr03/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxx. >> That is, please change /pr02/ to /pr03/. >> >> >> - Similarly, for 'Previous Version', please change underlying >> URIs from >> >> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr01/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxxto >> >> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ekmi/sksml/v1.0/pr02/SKSML-1.0-Specification.xxx. >> That is, please change /pr01/ to /pr02/. >> >> 2. In 'Related Work', the bullet for XML Signature - W3C >> Recommendation 12 >> Feb 2002 contains an incorrect date. The document's date is actually >> 10 June >> 2008. I suggest correcting this. >> >> 3. Note that clicking on the link in 'Declared XML Namespace(s)' >> results in >> a broken link. >> >> 4. In the Status section, the underlying URI contains a misspelling, >> which >> results in a broken link. Please change the spelling of 'committeees' to >> 'committees'. >> >> 5. The date on the footer is incorrect. Please change from 18 >> November 2008 >> to 5 August 2010. >> >> 6. Also on the footer, please change the copyright date from 2008 to >> 2010. >> >> 7, Please update the copyright date in the Notices section as well. >> Change >> to 2008-2010. >> >> 8. In 'Normative References', the formatting is off. I suggest moving >> 'http' >> back up to the left paren (as is done with the other references in this >> section). Note that this was correct in the last version. >> >> 9. Also, in 'Normative References', the date for [XML Signauture] is >> incorrect. I suggest changing it from 12 Feb 2002 to 10 June 2008. >> >> 10. Also in this section, [RFC 2578] contains a broken link. Upon >> googling >> this document I found a number of correct links, one of which was >> http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2578.txt. I suggest correcting this >> broken >> link. >> >> 11. To conform to the OASIS template, this spec should contain a >> Non-Normative References section, even though none are present. >> Please add >> this section followed by N/A to satisfy this requirement. >> >> 12. Please add the appendices to the Table of Contents. >> >> 13. Lastly, the line numbering is off beginning with [AES] in the >> Normative >> References' section. Please correct. This was correct in the previous >> version of this spec. >> >> Please contact me with any questions or comments. >> >> Best regards, >> Kim
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