John,
I attach the document with suggested revisions in the text. I used "track
changes", so you should be able to see them easily.
This looks a really good document now. I very much liked the overview,
especially its emphasis on trust.
Most of my changes are editorial. In particular, I have tried to firm up
points that have some text such as "and many others" and "it is recognised
that" that made things look a bit woolly.
Should we mention IEEE P1622?
Schematron is now an ISO standard. Perhaps we should change the reference
for EML v5. One for the conference call.
Regards
Paul Spencer
Director
Boynings Consulting Ltd
http://boynings.co.uk